Corruption
 

To much corruption in the world today/
everyone thinking it's a game to play/
through your dismay and all your perception/
all your gonna learn is a life long lesson/
pressing so hard to make you all learn/
everything keeps going, and you'll all burn/
here we go, your stomach starts churning/
now it's time to make urself an earning/
during the time you learn on your own/
seeing this world isn't like home/
seeing the deals happen on the streets/
these piggies making ends meat/
This worlds shot, don't ask why/
just worry bout yourself and try not to die

uuumm...SUPER SHORT lol, but for a newbie it was iight, you gotta elavate though....try an make summin bigger more complex...t had meaning but you can do better...juz keep trying peace

Dawg as he said a good attempt for a new kat,yo try and use relevant wordplay and some nice vocab,maybe throw in a multi or two,it did flow and i did know what the message was here,as i said it was a descent attempt for a new dawg,jus keep it up and try and improve.

Hit me up.

Peace

same...super short and simple, thought it needed work but it DID flow and WAS easy to read...nice attempt, hit ur head on a cloud, naomean???...