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How about u find some girls and quit being a hoe
Just cause u ugly ….even fat chics wont sink to ur low
I know mcs gonna hate and make me catch a case
but when my heat pops , Who gon catch ya face?
I'm a rude ass arabian , wit no fukin feelings
don't get it fuked up like me fukin ur mom on the ceiling
You talk all tough but send ur man to push me
I'm gonna pop the can , and turn him into pussy
You’re slow, and i'm way ahead of the race
I don't throw pencils but spit some lead in ur face
Stop spittin , you just too lame for this
I'll fuck u up and then ur mom will get hit
You a bitch , so what u still hatin about?
Change ur thoughts before I put my thirty-eight in ur mouth
I'll spit at ur gay hair, and watch ur side's burn
You been a real big dude , but now it's my turn
fuck battling , i'm gonna come hard ,cocked and ready
cause my heat will turn ur block into confetti
Keep talking shit and youll see who gets shot first
U gone be embarresed when i tell u about ur moms dirty skirt
Ive always been richer than u and its all good
U liven off McDonalds in ur broke ass hood
Ur just a wanksta and u need to stop frotin
U aint no friend of mine
U aint no kin of mine
U so dumb u probably cant even spell a nine
Nigga i know u slow i know u dumb
After i shoot u remember the number for 911

This piece was aight for a newbie , but u have alot of elevating to do.........Ur lyrics are simple , u need to up ur vocabulary , Ur content was good , but kinda weak , ur wordplay was really Weak , U need to elevate on that......Ur multies were also whack , also elevate on that.............I only got one thing to tell you.........ELEVATE........................

he said it. Return the favor on my piece Outlaw