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EnVy Ny 09-10-03 12:21 PM

EnVy Ny vs Pale Horse
 
10 linez (5 barz)

Go Ahead N Check In N Spit.....

EnVy Ny 09-10-03 12:56 PM

Are UGunna Check In Or Wha Kid

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Pale Horse 09-10-03 01:00 PM

Pale Horse Checkin in gimme a min. at work put up in 2 sec-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Pale Horse 09-10-03 01:28 PM

:mad:
/You masturbate when the Dr makes you turn your head and cough/
/But in this Battle you come up short like a midget with his legs chopped off/
/Just for diss'n youll wind up on the back of the milk carton missin/
/So Ill chop off your ear and yell in it just so you can listen/
/leave you in the fetal position and dont stop cause Im a fanatick/
/I'll leave you gasping for air like a choking asthmatic/
/I had it, Im sick of battlin this fagot that cant hack it/
/Dont worry though you'll get another shot in da Losers bracket/
/I can torture you all day and laugh at you pain just to hear you shout/
/But instead I'll kick your but so hard that crap comes outcha mouth/

EnVy Ny 09-10-03 01:52 PM

Just Seen Droppin Wen Im Dun

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Pale Horse 09-10-03 02:01 PM

Just take it easy on the newby mister 42-7--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

EnVy Ny 09-10-03 02:21 PM

Brooklyn Holla Back

Pale Is Like A Crack In The Sidewalk Cuz He Is Walking A Thin Line
Ill Shatter His Skull So He Can Voluntarily Release His Mind
My Bars Are Hit Hard Like They Was A Metal Erection
Quit Battling And Start Writing In The Poems Section
Pale Is Like Pilots In Training He Still Cant Land A Punch
He Prolly Tries To Bite So Much Verses Appear To Him As Crunch (Candy)
.:.:FuN fLoW tYmE:.:. :)
Ill Smash Your Verse In Thousands Of Pieces You Can Label Them As Reeses
Pale Couldnt Spell Win If He Had A Thesis My Loses Stay With You Like Diseases

.:Welcome To The Lost Column:.

~Won~

Was Fun.... :)

Pale Horse 09-10-03 02:31 PM

It was fun
but I dont know
I might have you on this
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Cryptic Thoughts 09-10-03 02:34 PM

[i]
Good shit from both. Envy came with some bette wordplay however.
Vote-Envy

It was close however....

Peep my battle with Born to Kill

Born To Kill 09-10-03 02:42 PM

This was actually kinda close...

Some good lines from the newb, but some of them were mad played. (all midget lines are pretty much played/so are most asthma lines)

Better wordplay, kinda mild hits, but overall nicer originality and better flow from Envy...nice use of multi's as well...

Holla back...
Born vs. Cryptic

Edicius 09-10-03 02:56 PM

Envy why newbs?


That new cat lacked vocab and complexity, envy had some iite punches, ....not a hot battle, ...little one sided...but envy took this on, wit a better overall verse....vote=Envy Ny

ålphå bë† 09-10-03 03:17 PM

Envy Took This One.He Could Have Done Better But Pale Came With Nothin But Weak Lines

Vote-Envy NY

Focus'd 09-10-03 03:23 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Ã¥lphÃ¥ bëâ€-
Envy Took This One.He Could Have Done Better But Pale Came With Nothin But Weak Lines

Vote-Envy NY




i dont need to say shit else

IceBerg420 09-10-03 03:27 PM

NV won this one wit better punchlines and Wordplay...PH spit a grip of played lines that didnt really hit hard even when re-worded............................................ .................................


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