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Tha Streetz Topical
i did post this to use against biddy central but the faggot never showed...so I can't let it go to total waste
Created: From Dirt to Concrete We Got The Front Row Seat We See What You Dream It's More Complex Than A Pipedream Problems Stretch For Miles and Miles It's Intricate Style is Elaborate Textiles Our Families Breakdown For the World To See We Don't Get Help Until We Make It Deadly Deals: It's Not As Often As People Think Ethopians Get Water More Constant To Drink Compared To The Quantity That Is Moved Our Voices Are Heard When We Get Grooved Smack, Weed, Dust, and Acid In Worse Situations We Even See Blood It's Something We Cannot Control Heard Quieter Than Unborn Souls Slums vs Suburbia: Two Different World With Many Similarities Both Sides Have Too Many Rowdies One's Got Something To Prove The Other's Got To Maintain it's Groove It's Something Politicians Continue To Ignore How Many People Get Eye's All Sore It's Definately Not Pretty To Stare At But We Were Dealt This Format Graffiti And Heathans Overpopulate Rich Bitches Always Pickin Wrong Times To Ovulate Hooker on The Streets Doin This To Survive Girls Havin Sex To Give Them a Jive Addicts Can't Get Off The Drugs Guys Doin It to Imitate Thugs Help: What Can We Do, We Have No Limbs We Just Watch to See How Futures Get Dim We Get Stepped On Till No End Were Treated Like An Enemy, Not a Friend We Can Only Breakdown to Be Dangerous And For A Kid to Be Brainless Takes Our Corner Too Fast Watch As His Future Becomes His Past Than Only Do The People Listen To Our Cry We Are The Streetz, We Need Your Reply |
lookin for some feedback....
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i liked it, seemed to flow good, i liiked the structure an the topic, it was a good piece, i was felein it man...8/10 check out my callab with puglist.."book of rhymes" lates
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tight to me i like the reflection peace and lyrical delivery hot joint pop
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Decent, You Need More Internals Though . .
Keep Writing . . Werd . . . |
White - fuck you.
you upped this piece 5 times, thats not allowed. read the rules you freeposting cunt. [ Closed ] |
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