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whitelightning 09-10-03 04:53 PM

Tha Streetz Topical
 
i did post this to use against biddy central but the faggot never showed...so I can't let it go to total waste

Created:
From Dirt to Concrete
We Got The Front Row Seat
We See What You Dream
It's More Complex Than A Pipedream
Problems Stretch For Miles and Miles
It's Intricate Style is Elaborate Textiles
Our Families Breakdown For the World To See
We Don't Get Help Until We Make It Deadly

Deals:
It's Not As Often As People Think
Ethopians Get Water More Constant To Drink
Compared To The Quantity That Is Moved
Our Voices Are Heard When We Get Grooved
Smack, Weed, Dust, and Acid
In Worse Situations We Even See Blood
It's Something We Cannot Control
Heard Quieter Than Unborn Souls

Slums vs Suburbia:
Two Different World With Many Similarities
Both Sides Have Too Many Rowdies
One's Got Something To Prove
The Other's Got To Maintain it's Groove
It's Something Politicians Continue To Ignore
How Many People Get Eye's All Sore
It's Definately Not Pretty To Stare At
But We Were Dealt This Format
Graffiti And Heathans Overpopulate
Rich Bitches Always Pickin Wrong Times To Ovulate
Hooker on The Streets Doin This To Survive
Girls Havin Sex To Give Them a Jive
Addicts Can't Get Off The Drugs
Guys Doin It to Imitate Thugs

Help:
What Can We Do, We Have No Limbs
We Just Watch to See How Futures Get Dim
We Get Stepped On Till No End
Were Treated Like An Enemy, Not a Friend
We Can Only Breakdown to Be Dangerous
And For A Kid to Be Brainless
Takes Our Corner Too Fast
Watch As His Future Becomes His Past
Than Only Do The People Listen To Our Cry
We Are The Streetz, We Need Your Reply

whitelightning 09-16-03 05:03 PM

lookin for some feedback....

rule 09-16-03 06:12 PM

i liked it, seemed to flow good, i liiked the structure an the topic, it was a good piece, i was felein it man...8/10 check out my callab with puglist.."book of rhymes" lates

whitelightning 09-17-03 02:03 PM

uppin for feedback

whitelightning 09-17-03 09:06 PM

uppin for feedback

whitelightning 09-20-03 02:57 PM

uppin for feedback

WORD~PERFECT 09-20-03 03:06 PM

tight to me i like the reflection peace and lyrical delivery hot joint pop

whitelightning 09-20-03 06:15 PM

uppin

-Magnitude 09-20-03 06:43 PM

Decent, You Need More Internals Though . .

Keep Writing . .

Werd . . .

Baron Mynd 09-20-03 06:50 PM

White - fuck you.
you upped this piece 5 times, thats not allowed.
read the rules you freeposting cunt.

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