Black and White Old Photo..!!
 

This is kinda topical...so Rate the topic side of it aswell please..!!

Time to pick up a photo,a picture speaks a thousand words//
a heard of letters beaming thru,theyre standin out like gangs of nerds//
churnin stomaches causin pain,becus this image has deeper means//
a spoken token of inner hoping,got emotions richer than ANY cream//
as i look center,straight and sorrowfull,i see the expression of someone sad//
like if theyre life would end that moment,that lil person would be so glad//
im looking back,cant reckal the face,but little one just looks deppressed//
to think such young a soul like that looks sad,is hard for me to ingest//
im standing starrin at the photo,looks old and dusty,black and wite//
a school of children lined in order,not one or two look out of sight//
some kids look bright,some kids look stupid,but this one looks so very familiar//
all fourteen of fifteen children, have smiles that finish with scintilla//
the ripped up rags that this boy wears has such a moving affect on him//
would he have stollen newer clothes to wear to school without opting?? //
choosing a day to look a bit happier,but happynes today aint happening//
thoughts of this boy endin life,with rope,and this boy balanced,dangling//
if this child ever looks with smiles,or any photo with a grin//
i know that life for this young soul wudnt have ended with life so grim//
so i turn my head,im thinkin harder, who the fuck could this young kid be?? //
my heart stops beating for a moment, and remember sadly,that kid was ME....!!



If theres any words u dont now...ask bout them..!!

I know a phew of u wont get this 1..!!
Scintilla = Spark.....get it...Smiling with a spark..!!?

anyway...any oppinion and compliment will be returned with a compliment on one of ur verses...1!! peace

Topic was hard to catch right up until the end, that put a nice twist on it, this flowed pretty good as i read it, internals were a little basic because i always use internal-multi's nowadays, anyways - flow was decent, i liked the concept, all in all not a bad drop my man.

Eace-Pay!

thanx bro..!!!!

pretty simple...
it flowed ok I guess...
rhyme scheme was aight...
But yo, I was really feeling the structure of it, that whole looking back a the photo thing... feeling that man...
This could've been better no doubt, but it was aight...

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^^^^lol....thanx man.....anymore..!?!?!

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that was a good drop..flow was hard to catc i thought but at the end was dope you ripped it god there i thought good all the way through but the end u came along great with a killer finish good piece..1

Yeah, good drop here and the end made the piece. Good on filppin that shit around. I liked the concept and the flow could have been a little better, but keep droppin shit like this. I'll keep an eye out.

Hit me up.

Laaate.

prity good, pritty good, like they said ur flow was kinda hard to catch but it was good

GOD DAMN....they acting like they beem here longer than me....BUT....thank you for the compliments..!!! lol