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Feeble Minded. 09-10-03 08:16 PM

Feeble Minded vs E. Mo tion
 
rules:
im first
10 max
no droppin links w/o votin fairly or i will not hesitate to make a jackass out of you, becuz if u do that u r one.

Feeble Minded. 09-10-03 09:21 PM

flows you wont resist, your notions wont persist. .
cuz to me, like missing feeling, emotion dont exist!
hoe is pissed, and E. , where'd you get the notion. .
cuz there never really was any W in Mo Tion!
hate to break it - name spaces.. were never cool
you'll ever rule? i'll quit rap but you'll never fool...
dont front u hoe ill beat emotion, he'll leave rb, come & go..
wanta perfect record? i dont care, emotion left me months ago!

E. Mo Tion 09-11-03 01:54 PM

I just saw this dawg, I'll spit in a few

E. Mo Tion 09-11-03 01:57 PM

Ya wack ass gett'n "knocked back" like that shit in my flask
Against Bribe1one ya spit "shit" and you just "re-laxed"(ex-lax)

Answering that ya better than me, well wait til ya "axed"
It don't matta what ya "post", cuz Im spitt'n verbal Anthrax

I am a "no-one", consequently the same person that beat me
Popp'n pills at raves the only way Feeble could say he "took E"

Im da verbal stairmaster, can't "step" with ya obsolete technique
Ya Top 10 on the site just cuz it's take ya daughter to work week

Whole site caught ya "frostbite" now no1 "feels" ya shit
"Emotion" got the best of you, must be ya fuck'n period

E. Mo Tion 09-11-03 02:11 PM

I keystyled this last night and totally forgot about this battle
sorry bout that feeble
oh well
upp'n fo' votes

~JacK ThA RippA~ 09-11-03 02:29 PM

dope battle
heres my breakdown
punches=E
wordplay=E
multis=tie
vocab=tie
personals=E
flow=Feeble
hot battle, no beef
Vote=E

J Nice 09-11-03 02:38 PM

I am a "no-one", consequently the same person that beat me
Popp'n pills at raves the only way Feeble could say he "took E"

this line took my vote.
e. mo tion's flow was more directed and personal towards feeble minded.

E. Mo Tion 09-11-03 03:38 PM

upp'n
for
votes

E. Mo Tion 09-11-03 03:56 PM

U
P
P'
N

E. Mo Tion 09-11-03 04:14 PM

*looks left*
*looks right*
upps thread

Dr.SeusS 09-11-03 04:19 PM

Feeble took this with better flow..by far..
punches were equal..wordplay goes to motion, but
your punches could have been worded much Better..
Close Battle, but his one goes to Feeble..

Vote-Feeble..


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E. Mo Tion 09-11-03 04:23 PM

^Well, I wouldn't except anything other than a DR vote from a cat named DR Suess

Young P 09-11-03 07:36 PM

Yo 4real... i seen Feeble come a lot harder... still a hard battle ta judge... ima hafta break it down
Two best bars:
E. Mo Tion-
I am a "no-one", consequently the same person that beat me
Popp'n pills at raves the only way Feeble could say he "took E"

And Feeble-
hoe is pissed, and E. , where'd you get the notion. .
cuz there never really was any W in Mo Tion

Punches: E. Mo Tion
Personals: Not many but hafta give it ta E.
Flow: Feeble... definitly
Creativity: Tie
Opener: Feeble
Closer/Finisher: Not great frum either but E gets it...
Meta'z: Liked E's
Multi'z: E
Werdplay: Feeble
Entertaining: Both
Overall: E. Mo Tion takes it wit punches and complexity
Vote-E. Mo Tion... no hate feeble... just didnt come hard enuff homie

JB1 09-11-03 08:20 PM

close battle.
Nonthing really stuck out. Except:
"flows you wont resist, your notions wont persist. ."
cuz to me, like missing feeling, emotion dont exist!

after that the battle didnt' seem that tight.

emotions did have a few good lines but lacked flow.

Ajax 0042 09-11-03 08:44 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by ~Young P~
Yo 4real... i seen Feeble come a lot harder... still a hard battle ta judge... ima hafta break it down
Two best bars:
E. Mo Tion-
I am a "no-one", consequently the same person that beat me
Popp'n pills at raves the only way Feeble could say he "took E"

And Feeble-
hoe is pissed, and E. , where'd you get the notion. .
cuz there never really was any W in Mo Tion

Punches: E. Mo Tion
Personals: Not many but hafta give it ta E.
Flow: Feeble... definitly
Creativity: Tie
Opener: Feeble
Closer/Finisher: Not great frum either but E gets it...
Meta'z: Liked E's
Multi'z: E
Werdplay: Feeble
Entertaining: Both
Overall: E. Mo Tion takes it wit punches and complexity
Vote-E. Mo Tion... no hate feeble... just didnt come hard enuff homie






couldnt spit it out betta... E had this


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