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K.Largo 09-10-03 10:02 PM

-Random Shit-
 
hmmm...a quick key what shall it b about......hmmm


how about.........RANDOM SHIT............hows that.


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Random shit I sort thru at times in my brain files ....constant-
If cudster sold ice cream, why was it his last stand..nonsense-
here this drawer is for senses...makes my responses quicker-
over in the back wall are the defense files which help me when im sick-or..
down and out cause even that .....makes my stomach turby-
sticks and stones do break bones but words do sometimes hurt me-
ok back to sorting thru..heres my breakthru..(ahhhhh)music to my ears-
hip hop was the file id been looking for...It'd been lost all these years-
yeah the good old days are great but they are last night dinner...ate-
another crate further back childhood years. lost peers ..my first date-:)
ahhh lets look ahead damn that rooms empty all fresh witt new paint-
damn that much more room for experience...... so much more to gain-
as i sit in the middle of this room scratch my head and think ahead-
if no more files are made, will i put a sofa and a flat screen if im dead-

rule 09-10-03 10:41 PM

good short verse, i liked the flow...'random shit" i liked that title lol but word play was alright pretty good drop later man peace

Pugilist 09-10-03 10:48 PM

I liked it, good flow, i liked those first four lines the best. I drop a lot of 'random shit' too, just for the sake of droppin a verse. Good shit.

StOrMiN lYrIcS 09-11-03 02:04 PM

nica vocab i liked your concapt you had a good flow 1 or 2 week parts but still hot


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