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yeah...um...yeah
u crazy cracka
im the x factor that wont let u past no matter how fast and will only let u kiss my red white and blue ass mo times then joey did lance bass u cant get through all ull do is die and be down on the ground lookin at the sky and then when ur dead and all u see is black ill be havin fun doin ur bitch in the back u try to get on track and want to hide scared to go out side specially on my streets and with all my hot ass beats so as i go into the hook ur in a shop gettin a new look done reply |
Yeah, um... Basic rhyme scheme, simple flow, and a bit cloudy as to what the concept really is. Sort of wanders like a Cash Money song, minus all the bullshit about platinum and benzes or whatever. And at the end you said "so as I go into the hook" so where's the hook? Is this the finished product? I know you can come better than this, but keep droppin and you'll get better as you progress.
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why oh why do people spit this type of crap. i aint hating but this herb is whack and really you need to go and read the tutorials in the 'whackness emergency area'
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i agree dis is just to simple, 1 word of advice practice, practice, practice
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