would you listen
 

If I asked you a question... would you let me finish,
If I tried to give an explaination, would you let me spit it,
If I died tonight and left un-expect-edly, would you mourn me in the morning or just forget about me,
and if I killed you in your sleep, would you forgive me for not warning, or haunt my ass eternally and beat me like foreman.
yo....


Criminal thoughts & a passive aggression keeps my mind stressin,
while I'm mic blessin I'm chin checkin like I'm an impressionist kid.
I cry at night cause these demented thoughts seep through my skull,
soakin my sheets in blood and shiverin me, freezin cold...
My knees get weak, but spirit gets bold,
coughin and wheezin like a geek while smokin the joints I rolled... yo,
Demons haunt my dreams when I sleep and speak to me a rap critique,
teach me how to blast heat and cause a devilish aftermath on every battle I reap.
I'm paddlin in a creek and wouldnt you know...
the currents spinnin me like an undertoe in a toilet bowl,
I'm way too old to be believin in ghost, but I know what haunts my dreams is somethin unearthly...
So when I wake up a three- thirty to kill you,
dont get mad at me... it was the demons that wanted me to.

hit me up on what ya think... i did this pretty quick so it prolly aint my best... but i still would like your feedback...
thanks,
A.T.
I

uppin

I LIKED IT I THOUGHT IT WAS N ILL ASS DROP NO DOUBT FEW THINGS CAN BE CHANGED BUT ALL SONGS ARE LIKE THAT

thanx mang... STILL UPPIN

thats some ill shit, i liked the concept good vocab

flowed,had some real good vocab and expression there,concept was original and good,nice drop dawg.

Peace

thanx yalll.....

STILL UPPIN

one a day

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