wheres the love gone?
 

restless fingers,
a thoughtful mind,
scent that lingers,
but love still hides!

Gentle hands opened me,
a pulsing heart fell out,
secrets fleed to the light,
for you, but no one else!

A star twice wished,
an empty heart torn,
lips fansied deaths kiss,
yet a soul bleeding by throns.

Edges are now rounding,
true forms are shining throu,
mislead eyes are crying,
from one who wasnt true!

Dark cold and frightful,
yet the timid arent scared,
not beliving whats happened,
mind and souls now tearred.

restless fingers,
a thoughtful mind,
scent that lingers,
but love still hides!


This is so ture about peolpe who love one another, but can't admit it. I know this poem oh so well, (J)nice way to express reality.

Dark cold and frightful,
yet the timid arent scared,
not beliving whats happened,
mind and souls now tearred

I know this all to well unfortunatly. It made me think and feel. poetry is a great way to express a feeling or thought. Keep writin and I'll keep reading. ttfn

god i am so glad to be a part of such a dope crew..............this was simply.........ill.............no explantation is needed but i'll give one anyway...........this could be interpreted in so many ways and every one of them is extremely emotional........two lovers who realize the price of making a relationship a physical one.........someone who got played.............or just a person who was lied to..........this was deep and it flowed well and i could go on for hours about the niceness of this piece but i'll stop now........i don't want to give you a big head.lol.........oh yeah and dope sig..........you make yourself scream huh?.............WOW....LOL.............good drop sweetheart...........1

thx prophiit for taking time to reply

my love

~Tera~
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I thought this was very well written. it spoke to me, its a very emotional poema dn it sounds like you really weighed out what phrase you wrote. very good