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the rhymes that come through my mouth are so good they cause seizures/
light by light makin yo mind all fucked up is my pleasure/
i put too much pressure on ya pussy it starts to pop/
i dont show props to hoes that wanna be safe cause i fuck them good/
i eat yo shit and spit it out like overexpired food/
its too plain and basic i just laugh at what you try to be/
this bitch tries to be street and ghetto and just falls off like debris/
i spit hotter than a volcano that erupts and slides down/
burns yo faggot ass and burns you all dirty black like burnt stone/
you keep followin what i conduct it will just leave you fucked and cold just like a strawberry ice cream cone/
you cant even get a girl to moan in the bed on the mattress/
you keep doin guys and my rhymes just makes you all depressed/
cause no matter what you do you still fall like a leaf on a branch/
gets all crumbled up and dry like on bushs gay ranch/
this bitch tries to be hardcore but he so boring it makes me snore/
who do you think you are an old guy with grey hair or a benzino/
he went to try out and the beat was too fast cause he was too slow/

someone critique this please

one piece a day

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