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Tonya~Montana > vs < ThuG WhytE
iight 5-10 lines....explain votes only....no BS!!/ NO HATE
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yo tonya you on the labtop?........................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ....................
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my sis doing her homework on it!! she trippin sayin her work first before i get on it! ..............................
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damn! lol.. that shits been up for weeks man............................................... .................................................. .................................................. ........
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Ight Just Seen This.. Gunn Start Keyin
Now.. Drop Within In 30 - 45 Ma.. - 0 n e .................................................. ............. |
I'm Gunna Spit Her Style And Be Prepared-To-Wrap Porn..
Ima Tear In Half Four, You Been Here Since 2002 And Still Spit In Paragraph-Form.. Dare-I-Laugh More? You Battled Me Thinkin You'd Start Writin And Became-Tight.. You Barely Alright.. Checkin Ya Merk List.. You Sure You The Same-Site ?.. Try Ta Gain Height.. Like You N' The Kids You Beat.. Ya'll Are A Bunch Of Bitches.. I Listed To Your Shit For 5 Minutes.. Hey Tonya.. Where Are The Punchlines In It?.. Ya Finished.. The Dream Is.. When I Say Your Wack.. Your Quick To Believe It.. Ure Played.. I Seen It..I Mean It, Shit It Took Me 3 Months To Discover U Dont Have A Penis.. Utterly Supreme-Miss.. Re-Think Ya Sex.. Forget The Text.. Just Turn-Out Lez.. No Good In Bed, Let It Be Said.. Both Heaven N' Hell Rejected You, So They Sent The Slut To Earth Instead.. |
that was an ill verse. i'll vote when tonya drops. but hit up my battle against eastside queen plz...its gettin slept on like a motherfucker~
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Come On Tonya.. Dayum...................
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iight my bad.....
I grab tha mic from Thug WhytE now he's
shook-and-FIDGES// Now he gotta Open his Own CLOTHING LINE cause my PUNCHES left him with to many STITCHES// Thug WhytE wanted to battle so I asked him Why Test// knowin I'll DEVOUR his Lyrics, call me READERS DIGEST// Dam when I spit my FLOW is HOT like a KETTLE Theme// ThuG WhytE wanted to Rep NewYork so he started REPPIN SCENE's with Drag QUEENS//<{get it} yea you ARTIC style cause ya brain Stuck on Freeze// you hotter than me, yea if you Step it up a Couple DEGREES// i spit Pound for pound as if I was tha Lady Roy Jones// while all your Punches CONNECT bout as much as kids witha TOY PHONE// .......Au Revoir :p |
Nice Drop Ma.. But That Was A Lil OVer The Time Limit
WOuldn't ya Say? Oh Well... Lets Get SUm Votes N' Such.......... .................................................. ................... |
iight heres the layout...both did well...
punches-thug flo-thug structure-thug wordplay-thug style-thug overall-thug i thought thug took this..... vote-thug |
i was overall feeling thug whytes verse better....
tonya you need to work on ya structure a bit...i wasnt really feelin ya structure.. thug that last line was a bit stretched but good nonethe less good battle but i think thug whyte got this Vote - Thug Whyte |
aight Thug brought too many personals and it was all funny at the same time, the paragraph thing i just noticed was all too true and his punches and wp brought the package like they do on the FED-EX commercials ;) just that good
Tonya some of that stuff i wasnt feeling too much, it was nice but it wasnt too original and there were no personals at all and just like every other verse i've seen from you i (personally) have trouble following the flow whatever thats what i think if i could vote i'd give it to thug Vote-Thug Whyte |
Def. needs ta be broken down ... very nice battle by both... ima read it again real quick .:starts scrolling up to read:.
.:done reading:. Opener: Whyte Closer/Finisher: Whyte... VERY NICE Punches: Whyte Flow: Whyte Werdplay: Tie Meta'z: Tonya Multi'z: Tonya Overall: Thug took it by a little... real nice drop by both... good drop frum a girl especially... just gotta give it ta Thug Vote-Thug Whyte |
Thug took this with better punches and personals.
Tonya- dont write in that form. Also need to work on wordplay used in punches. Vote- Thug Whyte |
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