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Xl Vs Smokajoka666
10 TO 16 LINES
USUAL VOTIN RULEZ MUST SPIT BY THE END OF THE DAY CHECK IN DAWG!!!! |
Check it, its time to spit!!!!
Even if you were BATMAN you couldnt SMOKE A JOKER and if 666 was your hand you wouldnt WIN AT POKER If you were pounding on WATCHES you couldnt KILL TIME and if your VOICE BOX was BROKEN you still couldnt MIME If you were THINKING of ya HOMELAND you'd have a WEAK STATE of MIND and if you had DISEASE as your PROFILE you wouldnt be ILL DEFINED SWITCH Your like an itch that I cant reach and if you step to me bitch i'll chop off ya feet, Whats that I can smell? the smell of your defeat and im spitting so hard my hits are like concrete. Im laying this shit down to bust ya crown and dust ya brow, Watch this space he'll spit discrace and i'll show him how. SWITCH & FINISH You style is cracking, of you i'll make a mockery, Your a lightweight rapper, ya smashed like crockery. You think your hardcore but your broken like a rockery, Your green and scared of me, you got no taste like brockerly. OK TWO MORE LINES FOR THE 16 LIMIT. Im not feeling ya lines your missing this big fish, Your obviously not tuned in so adjust ya dish. Ha Ha ok your turn son!!!! |
^^lol....man...u really wanted to lose....u sure u want me to post??....checkin in though....will post later on
peace 4:20 |
why didnt you just spit man this is meant to be freestyle not Im goon be back on in a bit after hours of pre-writin, not saying you are but if you go away and come back after hours then it woud seem that way to anyone.....the whole point of battlin is that you do it there and then off ya back...............
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^^u see that shit u fuckin pussyfart....that means till midnight tonight...lol...what a fuckin anus.....but of course...i'll post my shit..... battle me? bitch u got a SHITTIER RECORD than the PRESEASON OF THE FALCONS// like "THREESOMES IN POOL", i'ma "CUTTHROATS" cuz nobody is hearin what ya SHOUTIN// u SPIT SHIT, like a BLONDE DOIN A HANDSTAND ur considered a BRUNETTE WITH BAD BREATH// this battle is like an ELTON JOHN BEATING, cuz everyone will be here to witness this FAGS DEATH// this bitch can't DEAL with my rhymes like a HANDLESS MAN PLAYIN CARDS// u barely EXHALE (XL) WIND more like ur SHITTY rhymes are SPRAYIN FARTS// i'll tear u to pieces and leave u laid apart, like JEALOUS PAINTERS i'll make u HATE MY ART// shut ur COCKSUCKER cuz FAG UR SILENT, like PUSHUP BRAS, ur rhymes are a FALSE ADVERTISEMENT// PRONOUNS (pronounce) this kid SAD cuz his WACK VERBS ARE CRYIN, KILL THIS "FUCK" cuz ur "BAD WORDS" ARE DYIN// when i say bad words i mean u got a SMALLER VOCABULARY than HAND HELD DICTIONARIES// ur FAKE ur rhymes that are FICTIONARY, like DEAD PROSTITUTES this TRICK IS BURIED// u winnin this battle?? HA!!!! there's better chances of a BLIND MAN winnin PICTIONARY// 12 lines.....should be good enough...... peace 4:20 |
Decent battle here........Breakdown
Punches: SJ Personal: SJ Wordplay: SJ Metas: SJ Multi's: None Flow: XL Vote= SJ666 Man he pretty much dominated this battle from start to finish....XL u had a couple of decent punches but ya best punch was ya opener....... Hit my battle up in my sig ok......... |
^^sorry man...i can't vote yet...i sent The End and alldig a PM to get me to be a registered voter...but that shit don't work for some reason.....
peace 4:20 |
uppin for this bitch to be over with now...lol...come on now...suppose to be vets in this forum....let's get some shit crackin yo....
peace 4:20 |
all right, this battle was pretty much a run-away.......
XL4 whatever, your verse wasnt terrible. Your opening line was very nice, made me interested to see what was left...but the rest was kinda blah. Punches were all right, flow was kinda weird cuz ur lines kept getting shorter and shorter. Overall, not bad, but the rest was anything like ur 1st line...who knows.... Joka brought out his stuff as usual. You ditched the short font crap, thats always good. But anyway, yeah good verse...solid punches and decent flow. But the main thing is, you got better and more punches in...and thats what wins battles. Vote = Joka PLEASE get a honest vote on my battle against Trix...... http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=78434 peace..................... |
smoka joka... that whole style you got...
is completely shit... it has no flow... you still on that what " and caps shit... so herbish |
Joka took this...
But this battle doesnt even belong in Elite... Both were garbage... Joka had better punches and whatnot... But the CAPS are fucking annoying... We get punches... you dont have to highlight them... What?... |
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Any ways smoka took it Punches-Smoka Personals-X Flow-Tie Multis-Tie Metas-Smoka Holla back!!!!!! hit up my battle with Kautious |
Hi My Name Is... = Bitch....nuff said....iono bout the caps....didn't even try on this verse....and the pure obviousness of that is seen.....i usually throw some hard hitting punches....but i only gave enough in this battle to finish it off for me to get the win..........
peace 4:20 |
can well ell who won cat ya.....wtf cany peeps vote on this shit........dammit man getitn slept on worse than a fucking pilow.............................UPPIN
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aight....one more vote and this shit is over.....come on people....i pmed to become a registered voter....so i should be gettin that shit soon......
peace 4:20 |
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