*TaH* \/s The Unknown (fixed)
 

aiight 10 lines max you spit first

If you are offended by explanations – DON’T READ THEM!!!

CAPITALS mean there’s wordplay goin on

Oh yeh - I said in the battle call 14 so here they are:


I’ll flip ya lid and suck the blood out like ~DRACULA~
I got IDLE HANDS so you gon have to reattach it yourself – with a ~SPATULA~
You jus another CLONE fallin’ off the ship – rejected by ~ALIENS~
And yo rappin’ style and THEORIES so dumb they could be ~RAELLIAN~
You don’t like SMOKIN TREES ‘less they on a BONFIRE you prefer ~FLORIST’S-but-still-JUMP~
And you don’t like BUSH neither so Imma make you run through the ~FOREST-CHUMP~
Fuckin boastin sayin you SPLIT WIGS when you couldn’t ~CULL-A-CURL~
And don’t ever say you strong cuz with muscles you couldn’t ~PULL-A-GIRL~
You musta inherited the dumb gene from your mum - sayin you ~FLOSS-A-BRACE~
But you were only born cuz she fucked then turned the rubber inside out and used it again cuz she thought it ~WAS-SAFE~
You only UNKNOWN cuz you live a shady life like ~JEFFERY-DAHMER~
You don’t eat men – you eat em out like ~EVERY-STARTER~
It’d be a FEAT if you ever had SOUL like ~ARETHRA-FRANKLIN~
Cuz the closest to you getting laid will be ~URETHRA-SPANKIN~



<I>EXPLANATIONS</I>

Line 2 = There’s a film called Idle Hands – in that one of the livin dead reattaches his head usin a spatula.

Lines 3 & 4 = The Raellians are a religious cult who believe that aliens created the world and also say they’ve created the first human clone.

Line 6 = Forest Chump = Forrest Gump – In the film he was a real fast runner.

Line 7 = Split WIGS = Cull a CURL (cull means murder)

Line 8 = muscles – pull a girl along / pull a girlfriend.

Lines 11 & 12 = His name’s Unknwon – Jeffery Dahmer ate some men.

Line 13 = Feat = Feet / Soul = Sole (bottom of foot) Arethra Franklin = Soul Singer

Line 14 = Urethra = Tube in Dick so urethra spankin = masturbating.



Also - do I need to vote and post links here?



G/L - *TaH*

aiight check this out

ayo my defining of ill ness means you make me sick/
stop fucking wit the F.A.G.S and TAH go suck Ja Rule Dick/
you wanna floss well i'll pull out da mack and POP YA COLLA/
i got niggas that will kill ya family over 9 dollaz/
you will never catch me like 50 CENT claiming you'll get hurt/
but i aint fuckin wit you cus you like 2 BANG-EM-SMUF/
you about to get merked up like nas in belly/
and im gon be the nigga that roc ya head more than skullys/
make ya ass get jumped and i aint talkin bout a RABBIT GOING BOING/
ya ass get flipped like those 50 Cent COINS/
listen yo ass is really wastin my time/
my guns lock and pop more than ginuwine/
call me out we can settle this shit in the booth/
battalin me you must be a fool/
i'll drop ya ass than them niggaz failing out of school/

fuck man this shit was garbage lets go for round 2

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i mad some corrections to the verse

is it hard to get votes around here?

do u not have that 2 link rule or whutever?

not that i can vote anywaylol

TAH

ok good battle first i want to say that i hate murder inc so i loved this line

"ayo my defining of ill ness means you make me sick/
stop fucking wit the F.A.G.S and TAH go suck Ja Rule Dick/"

hard punch there even if i liked murder

TaH if u gotta explain yourself that much you know u need to make ya shit easier to read and comprehend... watch about stretchin' lines

Flow:The Unknown
Punches:The Unknown
Multis:Tah
Metas:Tah
Wordplay:Tie
Structure: The Unknown
Scheme: The Unknown

Overall Vote: The Unknown

good battle no beef or hate

i gotta give this to the unknown, pretty good punches, some weak ones but Tah had some confusing and stretched bars, work on your structure. i understood most of the wordplay tho.

vote- the unknown

ayo both of you hit this battle up... i need 2 more votes.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79185

2votes me uppin dis shit
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ayo vote on my battle... how do u expect to sit there and vote on peoples battles and post links but when somebody else does it u dont do it for them... thats fucked up.

dont be a herb go hit my battle up... not that much to ask.

breakdown

punches un
flow un
metas un
multies tah
personals both
consistancy un
worth readin both
overall unknown

hit dis
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=78421

Vote- Unknown

Both MC's came really really hard, now TaH had it in more category's but Un had the punches and the flow. And as every MC knows those 2 are the ones that win battles. Good battle though.

Poll on this for me:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1

yoooooooooooooo 4 vootes me
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