to all the peeps
 

today the whole world is sufferin from the hunger/
this shit that goes on cant go no longer/
their lives are all wet and stomped on like a wrapper/
thinkin and hopin some day their life will get better/
but their images arent that clear/
livin life in fear lookin at themselves in a mirror/
its starts too get cold and dark out there/
their life is 50/50 like truth or dare/
go this way and you shall proceeed/
take the other your fallin too deep/
you gotta holla for these peeps who were born into this/
you cant blame them, they cant get out of this mess/
they have stress and some are in gangs/
the only way out of this is 6 feet down by either drugs or bangs/
pray for the people who suffer this shit and need to be free/
give everything they need so that they are a step closer to havin a better life during the time/
get out of the crime so that people can listen to great rhymes/

nice drop on a serious topic.

sure man put the battle up, im still uppin for feedback

Hmm .. Your Gay ^^

.. Excuse Me For The Freepost

Btw Keep Elevating 2Hot..

Ok dogg here's the link:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79365
Go spit...

good drop
what i felt: your vocab, your subject, and your ability to keep your shit flowing from one thing to another

what i didnt feel: some parts you need to use better metas. ie. this shit cant go on no longer, their all wet and stomped on like a wrapper
^^ didnt feel that...keep your head up tho and keep postin, read 10 verses before you post and you will elevate :)

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79338

uppin for some feedback here on this since its my only one today.cause of a gay rule.

GOOD PIECE,OriGInal Piece

i was feelin it, i thought the vocab and topic was good, just keep elevatin dude ur gettin better.

that was some hot shit, u had a wide vocab, loved the concept keep it up