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sHock [vs] nevergoin2die
Yeah i know a LONG as battle by shock tha world
i have alot of them Rules: do crew shit, dick riders - stay on your own dick tonight Verse due: a.s.a.p - I'll post first - my verse is already done no pre-writtin shit, just wrote it then setup the thread Bars: 20-15 nice and long dont sleep drop a link we'll return the favor ya kno? |
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Ressurect-Souls., Texts-Unfold That'll Blow Egos Off-The-Dome Without A Drop-Of-Flow../ Clone Ya Loss, Left Yo |Mouth In Ya Hands| Like |Ettiquettes of Cough|../ Severed Anatomies Off And Pinned To A Cross--Bring You Closer To God../ Toss'd Ya Carcass Across Ya Squad.. (oh shit) .. Scarred-And-Bruised., Torn Apart and Abused../ This |Puss Couldn't Get His Point Across| If He Gave His Lines To A |WNBA Guard| To Use ../ Lose This Fool, Came |Cocky In This Thread| But Now Ya |Heads In A Noose| ../ I'll Carry Your |Eyes In The Mens Locker Rooms| And Really |Change Your View| .. Derranged Crews../ Fools Can Tell: Like |Spanish City Names| You |Began This Match With An EL (L)| ../ [ DONT QUIT YET ] (train your eyes for this): |Silence Ya Wits|.,Faced-To-Place Ya |Gimmicks On Pause| ../ Too-Late, I Left Ya ‘Speechless’ Like ‘Mimes With Lockjaws’ .. / Cuz shock Gon |Clap alwaysgoin2die*| Just To Get A |Round Of Applause| ../ (damn, think about it) Flaw-less Flows |Draws Blood| Like |Crypts Turned Artists|./ With A Flick-Of-Wrist I Leave |Nose Pissed| Like |Snot Fluid| Amidst../ Its Like Ya |Seein’ To Battle 5|, Cuz You |Face-In My Fists| ../ Blatant-Scripts, To Crack Heads In Seconds../ Scared Yet?., Like |Twin Miscarriages|, |Deliver Death In Pairs| .. Ain’t Eye’n Me—Ya Visually Impaired../ Cuz I’ll |Stab Ya Pupils With Ya Own Eye-Lashes| Just To |Part Ya Stare| .. (beyond ill)/ Rare Talents, I Come Prepared To Fathom Ya Death .'Taste The Lead' That Led To |Shoot Ya Mouth Multiple Times| Just 2 |Re-cap What Was Said| (ahhh)../ Scars A Bled.. Sidwalked Coated In Red.., Like |Recoverin’ Alcohics|, I’ll Make alwaysgoin2die |Miss A Bar| .. / Spit So lethal Chords Remain Scarred. / My Abode In Heavens Like I’ll |Pull The Sky To Tongues| And Really Let alwaysgoin2die |Drool To A Star| .. [ 5 MINUTE DEMO, OF REAL SKILLS IS UP ] -BUY THE FULL VERSION [BELIEVE].THA.HOTTEST.THING.OUT.[BELIEVE] |
oh shit, shock finally learned to rhyme, but wait, that shit was weak, i'll hear ya next time//
u call that shit a text line? lying to this website is probably ya illest crime// i make this bitch mine, shock u'd prolly be harder shovin ur dick into some apple pie// ai yi yi..i guess the sun do shine there, but u havent hit puberty, investigators searchin ur sack lookin for fine hairs// but who cares? it isnt any of our business that ur girl is laughin as she stares// ur big words dont impress me, they just depress me// cause the truth is most of the time ur using the shit incorrectly// u better respect me, ill shit going through ur head and touchin ur mom, indirectly// believe that the kid is hot? i think he's not, dude u have the whole web still waiting for ur big shock (where the fuck is it?)// son ur nothing new, everyday searchin webster for new synonyms to use// u go into battles knowing u gonna lose, ur pathetic, ur disgustin whole crews// i feel abused havin to sit here and read some of ur shit// ur disses to bash and illmental sucked...when are u gonna get it?// its ridiculous that i'm killin u and i dont have a word thats over 6 syllables// if u wanna battle with vocab, join the speech and debate team// come back here when ur raps finally cleverly deliver the right theme// diamond mindz musta lost they minds when they told u u were the best in whole crew// and we all kno thats not the truth. if i was u i'd leave em, cause i hate to be lied to// lemme remind u that shit isnt prewritten, and that i'm high off drugs// but still steppin on ur ass, ur forehead is readin LUGZ...// |
Well both you guys shit was pretty unorganized, though it had nice flow and decent punches.
Vote-Shock He was way more complex in his flow and punches, you threw down pretty hard on this one, learn to shorten shit up and orgnaize those lines, you could have a bigger record. Never-Your shit was pretty good to, thought it was way to basic for this battle. Shorten them lines and get to the point and you will be fine. PLEASE, ONE MORE VOTE: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79318 |
Thanks for your opinion
drop a link we'll return tha favor .;[.;[ .;[ .;.;.;..;..;. . ;.;. |
damn shock took this shit easily. the wordplay, flow, multis and punches were all tight. not quite enough personals but fuck it.it was a tight verse. the otha dude need to elevate.
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Lol, i forgot all about this Battle !!
Hey rB i'm the hottest thing out ...;; anybody with real skills holla at me ;;.. drop a link i wanna peep somebodys shit |
,.; uppin ;.,
frequent sleep on this battle, which was exspected People in regular frontlines - Most of them don't have the ability to read. So when presented a LONG TEXT - they choose not to even try. |
shocktheworld took that one in my opinion they were both pretty hot battles a couple of lines were mad good both of you hit each other hard mad good battle g'luk
hit it up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79550 |
WE NEED VOTES HERE
BUT THANKS FOR THOSE UNDER 100 POSTS TO ACCUALLY READING THE BATTLE YOUR EFFORT IS APPERCIATED YA KNO? |
we're gettin fuckin slept on, ur right shock..they must be intimidated with some shit longer than 10 lines
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^^no, cuz Peeps Vote then Dont Get Votes Back In Return..
ANYWAY... Shock tha World had Better Punches..his Flow was STuctured Much Better... More PUNCHES STOOD OUT.... NevaGunDie...your Verse seemed Simple... punches didnt really stand out To Me... POLL VOTE-SHOCK... Return The Favor AND DroP An hOnEsT VoTe Me –VS- IceBerg420 http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=79004 Me –VS- PugiList. STOP SLEEPING! http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=79262 |
well I hit up every battle i possibly can..
if you need suttin hit up my aim is : shockthaworld not a big deal to me |
now seriously do i have to explain?
one thing though, shock, organize, i'm not awake enough to pay attention to wat i was readin... anywayz... winner: shock oh and hit minez http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80190 |
THANKS FOR YOUR OPINION 1 MORE VOTE AND THIS BATTLE WILL BE CLOSED...
FEEL FREE TO HIT ME UP ON AIM IF U NEED A VOTE ON YA BATTLE AIM: SHOCKTHAWORLD |
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