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We Da Illest, the thrillest, givin you hyper active brain waves makes us kill-it/
Cryptic tonic in amneisic blood, sounds stage ready, crowds enter like a flood/
Rockin the mic like it aint right, spitten curel inteintions like a virgin is tight/
Quite specifiaclly, spit significantly, droppin lines like a horny fat kid on a date/
5 Line drop got you qivering, snakein up on you, sliterin, this is only the beginning/

Just something short, I want to fucken battle, but hey it aint that bad.

Drop some feedback.

good vocab, nice concept, bars were lill short but it waz gooood

Thanks, I have gotton that on every single open mic I have had, so that must mean I am pretty good.:)

Alright uppin for some more feedback.

good drop homie...short but nice vocab an flow...next time drop summin a lil bigger lol...better to read cuz that didnt really have a good ending...i thnik you it wud have sounded better if you made it better good flow though man lates peep mine "different taritorial flow" lates

good flow my nigga it could have been just a little bit longer but i was really feelin the vocab.

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Yeah, well I was feeling a little bit inspirational so I just decided to drop somthing short and to the point. My other ones will be longer I can assure that.

that was pretty good, the vocab kicked ass, the wordplay was good, but i do think it needs to be a little longer, nice drop though. keep postin.

it wuz aiight, bombass vocab,and decent flow, but i think the structure coulda been better...