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FanTa ZeE 09-13-03 06:00 PM

Sorry Mama
 
You'll never change me/
I'll always be the same/
I was raised in Brokka so i got tossed in this game/
You cant blame me coz shit, i am what i am/
I swear its not my fault, i do what i can/
But what your asking of me is to much, this is shit/
Give me one chance and i'll be gone quick as lickety split/
I love you and all that but i let you all down/
I think you'd be better of if i wernt around/
I got a fucked up head through all the liquer i've drunk/
But that aint the worst of it ; the speed and the skunk/
I'm the shit nobody wants stuck with/
The one that every lad on the block trys to fuck with/
Evil personified/
Thats what i am so sorry to all y'all, my dad and my mam/
I wont ask for anything, ever again/
If you can just accept that i too, go through pain/
And maybe one day tell me that i made you proud/
Even once, make a change from the times that we've rowed/
Cause i do love you, no matter how i act/
And i'm sorry for all the times that i've cracked/
And gave you an earful of shit I deserved/
Sorry to all y'all forgive me, its not my fault i'm absurd/

big up y'all tell me wot y'all think of this shit......

rule 09-13-03 06:03 PM

uuhh ELAVATE...your flows fuckin way off, your vocabulary is shot ta hell...the only half decent thing in this is your emption...maybe you should try writting a poem an then try to make it more complex that may help you peace check myn out..."different teritorial flow"

Maven 09-13-03 10:28 PM

one thread a day

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