dont try to get near me
 

dont even try to beat up on me/
ill just smack you so hard youll need therapy/
this bitch is too weak to stand up to what he cant/
if he do this his dirty ass will just be banned/
tries a punchline and it backfires/
burns his tires and crashes cause he dont have control/
all he says are lines from raps that he stole/
he too soft like a fluffy pillow/
too slow to realize the fact that hes a hoe/
dancin and spinnin round poles in gay clubs/
drinkin at pubs gettin drunk and gets down with fat guys/
he tries to be cool but this bitch so homo that he cries/
dont try to get near me cause i aint nice and ill just slam you down into the core of the ground/
leavin you there cause there is no reason for you to be found/
layin you there for days this bitch gets fucked by faggots and eaten by so many maggots/
flesh dead everywhere and blood all over the grass/
everything eaten up even his ass/
skin cut up like it has been slashed/
buried this bitch cause i didnt wanna see him last/

this is an alright little peice............put sum more meaning to it..........nice vocab and flow....wordplay could use sum work.....even out ya bars a little bit..................but all in all good job

hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79405

i thought it was ok. the vocab was good, the wordplay was aight, and the content was pretty good. overall id rate it a 7/10.

lol, wots dis shit, no wonda yall won 1 battle an lost 8, keep trying dawg

umm, dis shit is mad basic dawg, fo real

but, keep spitting yo

Word, this shit was madd weak, if i had to rate it'd be about a 3/10, its shows some talent but very little, its less then average to me.
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that was a an ok drop if you put more time into it i think it would have been much better but good drop -1-