Childrens Christrian Rhyme
 

yall bootyass muthafukkas wanna step to me
soy firme so fear me u cant murda-me
we'll see where you'll be 6 feet deep
or under the sea its all the same
in the game cuz theyll kill for a name
back when i was out jackin fools
yall were pissin in the kiddy pool
so dont call me a fool son
next thing ya kno ill roll
ur kids will neva grow
k i lost it im drunk as fukk peace

read this shit goddammit

lol, wots this shit, wanna work on ya structure and word play and flow all ov it

out.......................

Yeah, um, I'm guessing this could have been the start to something. Just take your energy and find a TOPIC, hit up that dictionary, and then drop.

you sound like you jus usein any word that rhymes, man. you also sound like u got some gangsta facade. chill, think about what your sayin, think and take your time. keep droppin and you'll improve