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J.Dubya vs A~Young~Gunner
5 lines min; 15 lines max
40 mins from check in ................... no prewritten no recycling no crew no hate no bite no d.r. .......... you spit 1st |
aight yo checkin in ill drop now im, gunna write it ,this minute
hea it goes::: I'll cut ur throat wit a wet blade flowin~wit~ur~blood ur words still wouldn't come out flowin~like~a~flood Like lil kim at the vma's i'm exposin~ur~womanly~features i'll tie him up and throw him in da disposal to decompose~dis~creature My verse may sound like britney but i atleast i'll hop~on~da~mic Ur pussy in da way u explain can't do audios cuz u can't cop~a~mic J.Dubya is the antonym for how ur lame~punches~sound And to think that ur only gay verse is hall of fame~bound pm'n me askin when r u spittin is it gonna~be~today Battle me so i get a litte respect i dont wanna~be~gay Ur shit hits like a bee sting then floats~off~like~a~butterfly fuk'n textce if we did this audio style what I wrote~would~make~u~cry I'll stick my mic down my ur throat then u'll know what words feel~like Dont fret a lot of great lyricist ghost write and wont ever deel~wit~the~mic |
Aight dogg, i'ma start my verse
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Like a blind person you can't see the light/This a fight in the night, I darken your sight//
Time for a lesson in Rapology, take a seat/Put ur verse on the street but it aint concrete// You a slave so here the shovel, dig ur grave/Stuck ur head in the ocean but no brain wave// Get used to that 0 it aint will never change/Wouldn't be able to hit me if ya fired from close range// Your verse was like me receivin a shit stain/Just reading it caused me eye strain and pain// You release so much waste, like pissin in stalls/Even as a b-ball coach you wouldn't have balls// Call yourself a pimp because of your clothes/Tie girls to a rope, the only way u could pull hoes// Your like a bubble that hasn't yet been burst/This battle has a new title: “The Best Meets the Worst”// Worked at a gift shop, got fired, u couldn't rap/Ya didn't know this was comin, like a booby trap// Look at these punches, it's like I'm Muhammad Ali/This will result in a KO, the referee's at three// I left you in the dust when you were chasin my verse/You still couldn't back your shit up if you spit in reverse// Back is against the ropes, my hand 'round ur throat/“I'm merked, ya even got my vote” was your death quote// |
Sorry bout the structure y'all, it fucked it all up when I posted it.
It's supposed to go .../...// for each line. But anyways, UPPIN for votes. ............................................. ................................... ......................... ............... |
Get used to that 0 it aint will never change/Wouldn't be able to hit me if ya fired from close range//
should say... Get used to that 0 it aint never gon' change/Wouldn't be able to hit me if ya fired from close range// |
yo wats that yo u have like 3 diffrent lines in a differnt post (freepost... lol...). you couldove just edited it :::...:::...V0TeZ
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Vote:J
Why:Your shit was so much out of order that I almost dident vote for you. Everything else topped Young pretty mcuh, but learn to get htat stuff organized dude.:) Young-Elevate and get those lines longer, don't stretch them though, good drop but try an elevate. |
Sorry to break it to ya newbie but ya can't edit your posts in Front Lines. UPPIN!
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Hey J: Here is the link to the battle I need you to hit up.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...4435#post774435 |
J Dubya took this from start to finish.
Some of my favorite lines are: Time for a lesson in Rapology, take a seat/Put ur verse on the street but it aint concrete// You a slave so here the shovel, dig ur grave/Stuck ur head in the ocean but no brain wave// You release so much waste, like pissin in stalls/Even as a b-ball coach you wouldn't have balls// Call yourself a pimp because of your clothes/Tie girls to a rope, the only way u could pull hoes// I left you in the dust when you were chasin my verse/You still couldn't back your shit up if you spit in reverse// |
Thanks dogg, but please don't post if ya can't vote. UPPIN!
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GUNNER- OK WORDPLAY & FLOW, SOME DIDN'T MAKE SENSE
FROM WHAT I SEEN YOU PUT "~" JUST TO SHOW THE 2 BARS RHYMED AT THE END, THATS POOR CONSISTENCY BARELY PERSONAL & VOCAB WAS MINOR J.DUBYA- OK WORDPLAY, PUNCHES I SEEN NO PERSONALS, FLOW WAS OK NO VOCAB BUT OPENER WAS BETTER THAN GUNNER'S, SO WAS WORDPLAY BRAIN WAVE LINE WAS THE BEST OUT OF THE VERSE VOTE= J.Dubya ^^dat very well explained.... VOTE= J.Dubya |
UPPIN (4)
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I agree wit all tha past ppl........J took this shit, Young needs to elevate and sharpen his skillz up..................
Vote:J |
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