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Johnny 6-feet 09-14-03 01:32 PM

an exercise in vocab
 
anyone who tell me to up my vocab or add multis to this can burn in hell. YOU try pulling this shit off at this level.


the asonine antidoe is already active/
although the aftermath is armageddon past with/
because we bowl over bastards and bodybuilders/
they turn bulimic, the best bet is they both killers/
in control, our controversial cockyiness is copywrited/
counting the cost and co-operate with counter siders/
desperate to dominate dons and dail out their doom/
dont get deluded, our diligence is never doubted, fool/
every exercise to eliminate everyone/
even the extra editions is eccentric son/
forget it, this fucking farmboy is fooling himself/
hes foraging, we're forboding with force and full health/
getting green, giving genocide to so called go-getters/
gan grene and grevious grappling to giddy slow betters/
however, we hold house to holy relics and horns/
who herald the four horsemen, you hear the war torn?/
ignorance is ignored or incisioned with incisors/
if iradicated, we're ill and been wiser/
just joshing, i make jokes that are juvinille/
sneer jeers at joe normal who justifies styles/
all king kongs i kid, kill kenny in south park/
with kits and koliadascopes at about dark/
longevity is lethal as long as you aint languid/
dont lay low, let loose and lead the lost bands with/
motivation, money, mocking or merchandise/
many memories are made when you mould the earthly twice/
no need to nosedive, never quit, be nonchalant/
the noose dont need a neck, this news is naked art/
make it smart, over the top, original and o-pen/
never oppressing, operatic with an old pen/
personally, i prefer a perfected po-em/
post past or present, piss-weak or potent/
it qualifies to be quoted or questioned quizzicly/
the status quo is made queer and tested physicly/
ran over, ripped to refuse and rolled to ransack/
rightly so, my righteous rage is roughly red-black/
sublime symettry is secreted from my soul/
so solid when subjected to seconds of penthathol/
it transforms into terrifying forms totally/
and tears through the traumitised and totes a key/
utilise uranium and unidetified objects/
unviel your ultimatum, the ultimate project/
vocal vocabulary that veers on varacious/
to verbally vivisect kids and vicious haters/
words can whip whelts in whelps when executed/
wisdom is worth worlds, when are we next to move it?/
the xenophobic are x-rayed and branded x-rated/
played like xylophones, excused and hated/
the youth or just youthful will yeild the future/
you yearn for yesterday and you're goals to shoot for/
the zebra crossing is finished, zulu nations and zodiacs/
watch apocalylipic scriptures, this zoo now zooms to black/

my brain hurts.

prophiit 09-14-03 01:58 PM

aptly title there is alot of alliteration in this as well almost came off as poetic to me............of course "all lyrics are poetry even if it's fuck you" i applaud your commitment to using advanced vocabulary..........but aren't you worried about some fucking herb saying "it's a little too much vocab." all in all i liked the piece the only thing i didn't get was the message i think it got lost in the exercise..............good drop though..........1

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Johnny 6-feet 09-15-03 04:03 AM

its an alphabet type piece, cheers for the feedback.

^^uppin this coz its dope^^

WORD~PERFECT 09-15-03 06:58 AM

YO THAT SHIT WAS DOPE BUT5 NOT EASY FOR THE FEEBLE MIND TO DIAGNOSE PER LINE NEVER THE LESS ILLNESS

**~SynText~** 09-15-03 08:00 AM

illness right here nice vocab and ish......would go with a audio good with a fast spittin style like MINES lol overall nice job keep it up....

7/10mics

DiverseSyndicate 09-15-03 08:05 AM

tight spit,i drop shit like this sometimes,all my verses are wordplay,vocab,and multis.nice drop though.~1~


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