J.D. vs SiCCly iLL
 

25 mins from check in
no streched lines
5-10 bars
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no quoted votes
no vote swaying
no freeposting
no prewritten
no recycling
no biting
no crew
no hate
no d.r.
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you spit 1st

.:.GOOD LUCK.:.

checking in dogg holla lets do dissssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss ssssssssssssssssssssssss

i'll check in after you spit
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ur quick to get KNOCKED OUT like MIMES on AMERICAN IDOL
yer best punches were just illiterate written typos
i'm lookin for HEAD n ya girl looks like a GENIUS
you'll neva c da LITE OF DAY like BIG PUNS PENIS
he betta hope i'm not trying to make his verse toast
cuz j Bites Mad Lyrics Claims hes STUTTERIN WITh QUOTES
hope u dont choke cuz my rhymes'll slit j 's throat
i'll bring CRACKHEADS to COURT to prove I"M DOPE
Finisher
Fuck bullets, I stab you with my pencil to fill your lungs with lead/
Add one to your head, so you know that you’ll always be “#2” whenever my names amongst the thread//

ok, checkin in...
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They say I have a sweet tooth the way I eat at your bars/
My words will cause disease, leave you infected with sars//-1
My friends call me Cobra 'cause of the venom I spit/
Your verse is yet another reason why herbs should quit//-2
Ya could have a drug addiction, every minute take a pill/
Even with all that dope in your blood you aint SiCCly iLL//-3
It's like I'm seeing decomposition as I watch ur words rot/
Putting your verse on a stove wouldn't make ya lines hot//-4
Look at this bitch he left where he was from blank/
Full of so much shit I could use him as a septic tank//-5
SiCCly's talking about how his rhymes will slit my throat/
He could cop Satan's line but wouldn't have a hot quote//-6
Like a bad nightmare my verse will continually reoccur/
You went out with about as much bang as a gun's silencer//-7

UPPIN (1)
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oh yeah, 1 more thing...NO quoted votes.
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Here we go:

Punches:Both
Flow:J
Multi:Siccly
Enjoyability:Both
Structure:Both
Vocab:J

Overal:J

This was a small yet nice battle. both Mc's came extremely hard and there verses were evenly matched up until Vocab. J had te advantage on vocab which gave ihm the win.

Siccly:Get more orgnazied, extend you lines and get better grammar. Try to get mroe multi's, you could be good if you learn more.

Drop a vote please:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...5249#post775249

UPPIN (2)
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UPPIN (3) Come on y'all
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Hit this up then leave a link, I'll return the favor
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You're gonna have to start uppin this SiCCly, cause I only have 1 left
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DON'T SLEEP DON'T SLEEP DON'T SLEEP DON'T SLEEP
DON'T SLEEP DON'T SLEEP DON'T SLEEP DON'T SLEEP
DON'T SLEEP DON'T SLEEP DON'T SLEEP DON'T SLEEP
DON'T SLEEP DON'T SLEEP DON'T SLEEP DON'T SLEEP

Close Battle.Both Had Some Nice Punches And Disses.Only Turn Off From Siccly's Verse Was The 2nd To Last Line.Ive Seen The Pencil/Gun/Lead Concepty Too Many Times.Nice Punch But Played Idea.

vote-J.D.