It's Over and Done...
 

Apocalypse creeps through, we witness Priest Sododomy/
As He breaks his vows, to be exploring a childs Biology/
The Apocalypse breaks through, the End ,we're told is near/
Before they didn't want to listen To God's Word, now they fear/
What is the worst to come, the death toll seems great/
Killings of all those who go against God,no time to hesitate/
Destruction began, we hate the 9/11 terror attacks/
But through the eyes of the "terror", their cause stays intact/
Think about it this way, when we fought for our revolution/
When we attacked the British, our home country,with an illusion/
We fought the British, so our war was like a terror attack/
When 9/11 came, their cause was to destroy Foreign influence in Iraq/
So before you judge other, you must look upon to yourself/
Realize the value of things that happened,seein you don't have much wealth/
You must figure out the death of pieces that fit in the puzzle/
Because like the Revolution, the taliban faces the same struggle/
They want to be free of our control, free of our Ideas/
Leave their country alone, We have our own lives we have to steer/
9/11 had a cause, if you look through their eyes it wasn't evil/
But it was more than the smoke of the towers to blind us,cuz I can see though/
How we acted before, how we are acting again/
Its a war for a lost cause, it started but we never gon win/
The Apocalypse is bound to happen, Like it or Not/
on another note, It's September 14th,where is 2Pac?:p

nice fav line:The Apocalypse is bound to happen, Like it or Not/
on another note, It's September 14th,where is 2Pac?

Like that reply....^^^^
Cam's thread really didn't help out did it?

^^Camarac........i got u a Herb^^ for the list


Well Skiddlezz

nice drop.u had some good vocab in here, ...a real nice flow....
i was feelin ur drop, ...i specially liked these lines

''Destruction began, we hate the 9/11 terror attacks/
But through the eyes of the "terror", their cause stays intact/
Think about it this way, when we fought for our revolution/
When we attacked the British, our home country,with an illusion/''

Oldo the concept, was not that new^^, but still a desent piece
I really enjoyed readin this, ..drop more pieces like this, props**

It really sucks when I have to up my piece a day after only on 2 replies.

good:
vocabulary
structure
flow

ways to improve:
multies
mataphores

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