short verse
 

progressively passing my knowledge on to others/
actively showing love just like if we were brothers/
speaking to the masses to send the right message/
knowing not everyone is thankful for their blessings/
not showing appreciation to the ones that came before them/
kicked in the door, and now they just ignore them/
now they act like they started the game/
thinking they're cool cuz they got ice and things/
now they forget who they are and where they came from/
showing that money can change a persons values/
doing things they used to not, like tellin they mama "screw you"/
forgetting what it is to show respect and love/
and they wear that analogy just like a glove/
many dont realize there's more to life than clubbin/
like appreciating their famiy's hard work and lovin/



comments plz!

come on peeps replies plz!!

sounds like a 50 cent and eminem dedication dawg. lol was this intended? nah all jokin aside i feel the concept coz we see it all the time, i aint sure about the flow but thats the problem with reading the rhymes instead of hearing em'. check out my new drop: history (african dreams) please thanx. Peace

thanx dogg!!

uppin fo comments plz!

yo that was a pretty tight topic, cause like supreme slayer said it does happen alot. anyway the vocab was ok, the wordplay was pretty good, and the content was great. good post man.

yo can u please return the favor?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81167
thanx

peace.....