New Track.... Critique Please
 

http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=569300&q=Hi

ITS THE TOP TRACK... BITCHES, GLOCKS, CHECKS

a new track by my crew please critique n reply n shit

It goes

Tech - On da Hook n First Verse
Me - Second Verse
Lex - Third Verse

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cum on does any one actually check this shit out

ayo, money power respect beat...ill shit..the hooks good, but its just like the orignal song...good production eh? 1st guy had a smooth verse, lyrics were okay, nice voice, 2nd guy was good too, delivery could be a little better "i blow so many Os u think i was a cheeerio haha" 3rd guy reminds me of freeway hahhaa....i dont like freeway but u could take that as a comment...lyrics were pretty solid still...good job

thnx dog... uppin for more replys

listenin . . .

alright quality . .. not feelin chorus . . . first cat . .. aalright flow . . . swallow kids line kinda played . . . second cat . . . second cat reminds me of someone . . . flow kinda off . . . cool lines but delivery could be better . .. feelin the beat. . . the last cat does sound like freeway lol . . . a lot actually . .. flow is off too . .. alright lines . . . good emotion tho . . beat fades . . . wait theres more? . . . guess not.

here some honest feed for you. not hatin at all.

keep ya head up and keep elevatin'. thanks for peepin joint. :)


If you liked that you might wanna peep "Love and A Bullet" by Nebo.

thnx uppin

uppin