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Behind Barz
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I've lived behind barz hid behind barz spit devine barz pissed behind barz if I had a price on my head then I'd be droppin' the tab... in any aspect life behind barz was the only option I had... verse 1: (drunk behind barz) I woke up one morning and decided to go out for a drink... I shout and it stinks...I gotta wash the vomit out of my sink... I'm feeling tipsy...really shitty...so please come get me... I got a hang over from last night...damn the Tequila hit me... staggerz when I walk...laughter when I talk as I try to crawl to the door... almost fall down on the ground next to the vomit all on my floor... who the fuck is this whore...laying next to me in bed... I thought she was drunk but I think she took some exstacy instead... damn...I let this fuckin' whore get a fuckin' one night stand... I must be one nice man...to wake her up her face had met my one right hand... my life is invested in drugz and alcohol and I don't regret it at all... it's better to be drunk behind the bar than sober ahead of the ball... hook2x verse 2: (life behind barz) in jail I've been exposed to the most savage of acts... seen a man get stabbed in the back with an ax... in the lunch line niggaz harass you in packs snatchin' ya snacks... during a fight once I got hit in the back with a bat... my reaction was fast...as a matter of fact... snatchin' the bat away from that nigga before I splattered that cat... don't sag ya pants or you'll end up gettin raped when in jail... everything we take is for sale while we anxiously waitin' for bail... we sometimez try to escape but we fail...it's like the system got us tied to a rope... sellin' cigarettez down my cell block but I'm too tired to smoke... unless someone is supplyin' some dope ... when in the shower'z you gotta have ya wrist practically tied to the soap... if not...you know what happens although some may try to deny what I spoke... yeah I been locked up and I don't regret it at all... it's better to live behind barz than be dead ahead of the ball... hook 2x verse 3: (hiding behind barz) it's like with all this bullshit rap there really ain't no time for a real mc... so my personal persona revolvez around my rhymin' ability... timin' so skillfully shinin' on the mic to show my versitility with wordz that kill mc'z... hyman agility when my gunz pop and pussiez flex... mistooken reps only wish that they could follow in Brooklyn'z steps... I've acquired a taste for rhyme...but not only cause I love the art... I break drugz apart cause the rest of my life is a waste of time... a wasted mind...that what teacherz said when I was in school... I ain't a fool my nine was my tool... I stayed on the corner during sessionz cause I alwayz thought that rhymin' was cool... I been spittin since a young age and I don't regret it at all... is it really better being broke behind barz than rich ahead of the ball?????? (I don't feel like thinkin' no more for the moment so I'ma do the other versez another time cause this is all off the dome and I don't wanna erase it I'ma just post it as is for now) |
nice imagery and wrodplay a lil simple piece very nice read....
6/10mics return the favor |
yeah...it gets better...or is gonna...this was just the 1st verse...I'ma get into all the thingz I listed eventually...and then it will be more creative and original...I just posted this early cause I didn't wanna lose my verse cause it was all off the dome...and I ain't got nowhere to write it...but trust me...it will get better...
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you used simplicty with speradic complex attacks i think given ths as audio instead of written this would be mass ill great job boss.
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^^^ thanks fam...just wait till I have time to key up the other versez...it gets more complex with each verse...I know this even though it's gonna be all freestyle cause I'm just that dope...lol
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cool cool holmes
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verse 2 has been posted...still at least one more verse commin' at y'all mufuckaz...
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this was dope i was feeling the first verse more than the second both came correct lyrically just the first had more of an interesting flow and it seemed more real. no hate just my opinion. overall the piece lacked nothing seems like you watered down your vocab for better flow. i liked this keep it ill dawg.
check my piece if you get a chance http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79942 |
THIS WAS OMEN MATERIAL NO DOUBT A HIGH GRADE LEVEL OF LYRICISM.
THE QUESTION I HAVE IS WITH MORE MEMBERS THEN US WHEN WE GONNA START RUNNING THIS TWIN? WE NEED MORE COLLABS WITH YOUR SKILLZ YOUR THE BESTTO TRULY BRING US OUT THIS PROVES IT. |
^^^thanks fam...I appreciate it...this piece still ain't done yet...I'm thinkin' of gettin' a coupla headz from the crew that think that they can stay on the subject to hop in this track...and if nobody can...then when I get equipment I'ma put it to audio...
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yeah nice piece dawg, how long were you in jail for?? you can tell you hated that shit lol keep reppin OMENS to the fullest homie
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if I told ya I'd have to kill ya...;) and of course I'ma keep reppin' Omens to da fullest...I am the leader...lol |
verse 3 is posted...
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liked ya shit, specially da first verse, sounds like you talk from experience, peace!!!!!!
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^^^lol...of course...
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