Scrap Sheet Of Paper. .
 

This Was Written On A Sheet Of Paper
I Did At School, It Was Going To be Audio
But Then I Didn't Feel Like Recording It . . . so . . .

I Won't Die Soon, But when I Do . .
I Wanna See My Face In The News..
Next to You!
Headlines Read, Violent Shoot ..
Gang War, That Ended To A Hot Pursuit ..
3 Killed , 6 Left Wounded..
Letter Laying In The Left Of The room hid..
Cops Viewed It, Took A Breath ..
Letter Read:: HAHA I JUST FAKED DEATH!!
So They Called The Press & Put Warrants Out
For My Arrest, None The Less,
Couldnt Test..
Halfa Year Later, Put The Case To Rest..
Now Im Back On The Street Hustlin' These Techs ..
Learned the ropes & I Blessed..
Learned to Cope That Im Vexed..
Its All Hope Guessed..
All This Shit Planned, Got My Hopes Up ..
But God Damn ..Then I Woke Up ..


:whacky:

Heh. .
Story line was actually pretty dope, it could of made for a decent piece if you'd of pursued it further and tried to extend it. Flow worked as i read it, stayed on point, not a lot of internals or multi's which could help it in an audio id imagine. . ending was gay, [ lol ] been done many a time and im sure you know that Jae.

Eace Pay!

Wow....this was cool...Actually It should've gone to audio, it would've been better than on here, but it was actually a pretty solid piece....The end was pretty funny.good shit.

that shit was hot it sounded like some llyod banks shit mad good drop !!!!

that was some fire my nigga big ups. i was really feelin that shit

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