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WE'RE BAAAAACK (bre in tha house!!)
anyone who wants it
is welcome to come and get it and just in case ya missed it Bre's back bitch don't get it twisted these words i spit defy both rhyme and reason my mind defines space time and changing seasons elvations on hold talent leve is peaking foundations is shaking on RB so i ain't leaving i serve slurs occured on this platter of expectation no hype needed Baddest Rapperz Effects next generation i heard the whispers about Bre becoming complacent but face it these aces were biding time smoked in tha basement so strap on ya boots ya gear and then take ten paces we're about to destroy what's left of this hip hop nation anyone who wants it is welcome to come and get it and just in case ya missed it Bre's back bitch don't get it twisted i think ill thoughts which spill offa my tongue i've scaled the ladder of success you're still on tha bottom rung fuck wit us bitch we'll have ya turning tricks i'll overshadow ya skill like the sun during a full eclipse i came fully equipped wit tongue and lips to rip the mic degrade a dyke and spit it sicc so think twice before deciding to beef wit Bre we got cats that'll Kurse ya crew Mentally the past lays behind us we're forging ahead you're left in tha dust choking on words we said anyone who wants it is welcome to come and get it and just in case ya missed it Bre's back bitch don't get it twisted |
YO THAT WAS VISIOUS A LIL SHORT BUT ILL NONE THE LESS IENJOYED IT AND WOULD LIKE AN EXTENDED VERSION.
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^^^yup...you rep ya crew well young one...lol...but yeah..this was dope...just extend it a little and it will be dope-er...lol...I like the way that you managed to incorperate Mentally Ill (BRE'z Leader) within the verse too...that was hot...
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yo that was some hot shit, but like they said if u put one or two more verses on this thread itll be even nicer, keep it up man..out
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like the groupie i am i have to agree with them...
this was good, the flow was easy, the vocab was there, little lacking on the multies but none the less it was hot I might have to bite this idea and make something about IJL... if i do ill make sure to say u did it 1st... but ill do it better...lol good drop! if you have a sec (open mic) http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80134 |
yea i was feelin this man good flow metas and consistancy rep it lol
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good spit..short but ill...everything was there an ya end line was cool..i liked that dust talk..it was tight..good piece keep an eye out for ye other stuff peace
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Yeah this was a good peice, good read too, your flow was good i thought, your vocab was good, could use some more multies but its cool, but overall id say it was a good peice, keep dropping
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that was a pretty tight peice. i was feelin the flow, vocab, and wordplay the most, but i do agree wit masta c u could use some more multis, but the verse was still kool. overall that was a good post, so keep postin and elevatin man, i enjoyed readin that.
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man this is like two weeks old. lol. thanks for tha love tho
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