Eceip Cim Nepo Na
 

The Incredible Hulk


. . Gallantly He Fought, against The Malice Of The Storm
as media propoganda affect the Balance of his Thoughts.
a Talented Source, this Brown haired male, a Known One
now merely banner cloned from a horrid gamma explosion. .

His grammer frozen behind the mind of a possibly gifted MC,
Who can 'Raise the roof' & 'bring the house down'. . literally!
Each Frown Instantly symbolises the sudden rage and angst
to Wade the Past an` single-handedly destroy All in his Path
walls smashed with relative ease, and destoyin comets whole
His mind Bestowed w/ More Issues than Marvel comics sold!
And as this Sonnet Unfolds, He'll Attempt his Vent on Peace,
thunderous Footsteps will Awaken the city that Never Sleeps
Is he really A Beast? Or a Victim to the System's angled word,
With Genes Torn At The Center, like my old Wranglers Were?
saving the worlds become common place, he flirts w/ disaster,
if Green's the Colour of Envy . . then he's one Jealous Bastard!
that Zealous Factor's his Stronghold, but he misses love most,
In Relationships, its like he Needs Distance too Become Close.
Full of Lost Hope, that Poker Face Covered By a Mask of Lies,
Hated By the Same People He Tries To Help, His Task Is Nigh.
Angers his Disguise. a curtain to cower behind when in denial
Deep Down, he'd Stop at Nothing - if he'd greet Him w/ a Smile.
While we Doubt Him. . this Man-Mountain struggles to adjust
Yet he's loved and lost, paid the cost - & he's just like all of us.
& i know because, i sat and talked with the big guy on his wall
He's human like you an me, the Hulk aint so 'Incredible' after all.

'An Open Mic Piece'

at first i saw the title i was like WOA! Heeeey Macarena! but good thinkin for the title...

Well the piece, it has a nice flow, ...u used some nice vocab aswell,...the concept was rather new, i cant recall seein somthin like this, ...I like the twists in it, ...bout the comic ''marvel....real nice thought off,....kinda reflects real life i think^^^....mostly Rb,....Thinkin they it''incredible''....back to the concept, i really think it was a nice concept,not played at all,....very good and well explained by u, ....and i think its olso a kinda off reflection , ...of somone.....u?, Real nice drop consistent, ...no chops, ....real nice

8,5/10

asd

^ Moron.

This was quite the dope shit, Cam. .

Alright - concept was dope. Loved the topic, and you ran with it nicely. Some nice quotables in here. .





Those lines really stuck out to me. .
Flow was dope - Was able to follow the whole piece very nicely.

Overall, this was dope man. .
Keep droppin` shit like this.

feeling it, pretty good shit...
It had flow, and vocab, nice rhyme scheme and all...
I could kinda see the metaphore in this... pretty clever...
But damm... how this Hulk thing just come to mind? lol...
For real... never heard nothing like that before man...
You big comic book fan dawg? lol... I gottah say, shit is pretty original...

-1-

Hahaha! This is my verse for the topical tourney finals at Restless Rhymes

= )

Wow....that was amazing.........All of it....put it in RB legends

whoa..you came nice in that peice,
the flow was great, the vocab was wored perfect i thought, how the structure was it seemed everything fit in the right plass, good peice i liked this the best...

"And as this Sonnet Unfolds, He'll Attempt his Vent on Peace,
thunderous Footsteps will Awaken the city that Never Sleeps"
i thought that had a great vibe to it, and the start and finish..those were also really dope i thought..all in all man 9/10...check out my punk ass collab lol...its called Book of rhymes" with puglist...thanks amn good drop

^ Yeah, i'll get at yours soon.

This has been nominated as a Legend by the way, go in there and vote you hoes!

i loved reading this. you showed me the intro before and i said it was dope.. actually reading the verse that followed the beginning opened my eyes. i wasnt really a comic book fan, but this captured my interest through your vivid imagery, and your incredible vocab. i thought the love and lost, paid the cost lien was corny, but it did fit well with the piece. i guess all we can do now is just count how long it takes for someone to nominate it into the rb legends.

^ It was nominated by Bazzy before you even posted my good man.

= )

what can i say cam u never seem to not impress ......
overall a very dope piece..good everything it had all it needed to
make it a good verse.......damn ked ILL......

10-10

that was some hot shit the whole concept was tuff as shit and the medaphores was off the walls. i love shit like this becuase thats the way i flow and its hard to find people with the same interests. briliantly put together and well built. i guess your message to use was that being an mc is like being the halk you have to have the rage to spit hot and be strong to serpass all. nice shit dog

wow thats pretty fuckin silly hoss...prolly the most in depth well see on here