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FanTa ZeE 09-16-03 12:58 PM

Read, Respect, and Reply!!!
 
~Liba Dees Verse / Song Reposted..revised..all that shit~

Think I keep reliving the moment, reliving the night,
When i stared into his eyes for the first and only time,
Swirling winds i gazed upon in those fiery eyes,
A lifetime of dispair, caught in a circle of demise,
And yet peaceful, they seemed, inviting me in,
Wishing my own eyes upon them, relieving me
from this world of sin and suffering,
From crime and death and pain to come to them,
So gentle were those eyes he had displayed upon his face,
They made me forget about my life for a change,
and fall asleep inside their pupils, deeper than all space,
And to hope to wake up in a better place, this was the dream.
And for the first time i can see that anything i can achieve,
So everyone whos ever lost a friend, I know its hard
but anything is possible if you believe,
You never know when death can strike close to your heart,
I know from experience it can tear you apart,
But when i stared into his eyes that night, I knew that
God had done this for a reason, and hes in heaven now.......

this is the time to tell someone that you love them, death can strike at any time without warning, i may be young, but i already know that much. So please make someone happy today, the future is yet to be written........keep ya head up always.

peace and love

sorry for doing this..you have to apply to the rules though...
we all have grown up fast...dont let it break you down....
~Content~

FanTa ZeE 09-16-03 01:22 PM

Yeah i know this wasn't exactly a 'good' piece but i just kinda had the words in my head and wanted to get them down on paper, the message was good though yeah? i been through a lot lately with my friend dying and all and today at school i heard this story about a girl who died while staring into her boyfriends eyes and i was just inspired. I do that sometimes...lol @ me. Ok i'm talking crap now but it does have a point, please don't sleep on this one people, it means a lot to me.....

peace and love

Smooth JT 09-17-03 10:43 AM

I like and i know what your gong through. Losing someone is hard and specially if it was someone close. Well my train of thought is different from others but i take this as putting people before yourself. hard to explain. keep writing

Legendary 09-17-03 10:53 AM

Smooth, what are you responding to? Content took it out didn't he? Or is the writing somewhere else? I'd read and respond to it but it's not up so I guess this is a freepost.

Smooth JT 09-17-03 11:07 AM

to both of them actually

FanTa ZeE 09-17-03 12:55 PM

Yeah he took it off! damn it wasn't that bad....lol n e way shud be back up soon, thanx 4 the feedback i DID recieve, much appriciated and plz plz Content put it back up!!!!

peace and love


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