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Bio*Chemist V.S .|By0niclE|.
Ight I already set the rules in B.S.. The due date for verses is due wednesday Night.. Line limit..10 bars max two lines equal one bar.. ight...Hope I did this right.. peace.. |
This will be my last time posting here unless it's my verse... .|By0niclE|. U need to check in by tonight... If you do not then forget this battle.. |
Dropin....
-Like Rodents and Syringes on Corner Crack Spots..and Snitches running to the Cops..Ama leave this dirty Rat Shot...Check his plot..This kat is hungry when he's under-The-cover... put this herb to bed..I told u he already was F.E.Ds.. I shoot until this victim dreds...Can't use Byonicle to call the paramedics.... because his Lines is Dead.. Take a knife then shred...Leave ya mental in missoury...Now like Vegetables and Alzheimers Intellegence Ur thoughts is Corny... -Not another alias named Byonickle how boring,...This bird is in another world...Leave it to me,..To smash his Eagle ..(Ego).. Trip..Watch his head fall in swerve... Put this herb head in water and you won't ..Submerge..Im on a verge to split Ur dome like the earth axsis to watch Ur head curve...I use good sight to find U and Diss-Ya-Earn..(Discern) I bring Captial Punishment..because I throw Fatal Hits...When I spit I'll leave U Frantic..Like Crack Heads locked in Up Stairs Closets Ur just another Addict..(Attic) ..... |
this chemist is like a dentist always mouthin with the jaws |
im doubtin his cause of ever havin an account that can withdraw | that leave u poor, I saw ur sig., u have no dick but u can beat the best | leave u with a dirty heart without insertin cleats up in ya chest | lessons are taught to the poor, im always killin this guy | oh, n i bet u got un-noticed like this 17 syllable ryhme | if somebody told me u were good, now i'll pop ya man | n leave u sleepin with the fishes like a horny Aqua-Man | bio has no ability to rhyme, his elevation level's down the ladder | think im flattered? ur bleak n ur whole verse was weak like old men's bladder | beat me? shocking, this kids a loser..chillin with his hands in pants | in person u cant stand up to me, net? u dont stand a chance | i wont be hesitant to attack n break u down like sediments | challenge me? should've delayed ur actions like speech impediments | u been booed n chewed, bi0nicle starts to stomp ur face in | i'll put ur toungue n nose in ur hand just so u can hold a de-scent conversation!! | |
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the first dude was just typin stuff didnt really have shit to that verse or whateva second dude cam better iller lines punches and wordplay vote- Bi0niclE .......................... ..................... .................... |
ok I usally don't sway but did you actually read my verse...no.
and you didn't even explain nothing at all...just because u have 417 whatever post doesn't mean anythiny...this site voting system is garbage so far... |
^stfu.
you lost. willy was right ur verse wasnt aimed at him well. his was funnier, better structure, better punches, nice aqua man lines........ better flow..... yours didnt have all those things... and dont u dare tell me i didnt read ur shit. |
??? Chemist ur bars weren't hot just face the truth Byonicle came harder with the punchlines and metas i felt his shit better ur shit wasn't all that writing ur bars CUTE doesn't make it hot kid Hollaz~1
Vote=Byonicle |
#1 .............You should be banned for making us have to read your verse in Red .... , #2 Bionicle beat you six ways to sunday , Better Flow , structure , funnier lines , and more technical.
But Bio , you do have potential , I did read your verse and a few of your lines were pretty tight , unfortunately I have to judge the whole verse , and while some of yours were hot , others were not. Overall Bionical won , but it was close , and seriously man , reading in reds in hard on the eyes .... CE |
Lol...@ reading it in red....
Just like the color..whatever...ty for critique...and for Feeble Minded ...if u can't tell me to stfu face to face...then don't do it online..wanna be thug.... I won't post on this thread again....I just see how votes go .. peace |
Bio Chemists verse was a load of bull, wack ass verse, his "so called" punches only remained "so called", not close on being a punch
structure was poor, flow was poor, it was just ass BIonicle hit harder with better punches he didnt have a BANGING VERSE but it was ALOT better than CHemist n leave u sleepin with the fishes like a horny Aqua-Man | (had me laughing a lil bit) Vote = Bionicle simply |
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