.|By0niclE|. VS. White-Virus
8-12 lines like you said
no dick ride, crew, hate, votes Dont' freepost in this thread i'll spit first check in deadline tonight this is my check in.........writin my verse now |
Ya lyrically jeopardized, verbally pertrified, after this battle ya gonna be mentally paralyzed//
Tha uncurable Durable infection will have you steralized// "Stare in my eyes", I like to see who I kill// Handicapt by heart, hell man you physically ill// Go ahead and take a chunk outta my verse cuz i know you'll bite it// Dispite this, I could beat you wit half a bar, so go ahead and take my spit// shit, I can tell the way this cat is by the first two letters in his name// (Bi)By betta hope you fat like Joe cuz i'll dissenigrate ya cell membrane// (finisher) Byonicle couldn't beat me if he wuz spittin punches as fast as "Sugar Shane"// Even if I was "Oscar" inna a paid off bout, i'd still win, betta yet drive you insane// aight dog, waitin on you to post now........ |
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i thought this site had more talent than that for that verse, heres a black hearse, white's just a slim kid | let him dig his grave, u were dead wrong n still couldn't win big | white's just Irish filler, this virus a killer? if only heard of such | curved ur butt, ripped u a new asshole for every herb you've touched | marathon, this kid's running solo just to reclaim his title | retain the bible, even if mistaken for Herod u wouldn't be framed an idol | sprite's the drink, kill this virus with net carbon n write the link | white's the ink, you're the definition of type before u think | ur complexity was useless, u had no punches, or was it just perplexed? | I'll knock ur face, like forensic with toxic waste, all I did was dust ur text! | |
i think this was a close battle...i liked beyonicie flow better, both were good spits equal punches but i felt B had a better structure...my vote..B...
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hot battle and close but i got to give this vote to B also ~1 vote for my battle peeps
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79986 |
Bionical had Better Flow..Vocab Wordplay..
Over-all Beter Punches Too... White Virus, your Punches were aight. but the Flow was Choppy as fuck.. POLL VOTE-Bionical.. RETURN the Favor and Drop An Honest Vote POLL votes Needed Me- Vs- IceBerg420 http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=79004 Me –VS- PuGiLisT http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...0836#post780836 |
aight its a close battle but im gonna give it to white he had multis and i thought he came a little bit harder on the punchsand i was feelin his drop actually i was feelin both of them just more so whites im not haten its just my opinion vote white and hit this shit up wit an honest vote aight niggas holla
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79323 |
bio had some nice punches...both had good flow...bio was more direct with disses that landed well....good wordplay...
WV was iight but his punches did'nt hit as hard...disses were ok....his wordplay didnt have a impact ... overall betta verse from Bio. |
aiyo...
white virus had some ok punches and some decent wordplay, his vocab was alright, but nothing extrodinary... his flow was a bit off but its good... I rate this at a 6 Bio- had some decent comeback punches and some extensive vocab, his flow was on and a lot easier to read... wordplay was lackkin a lil but it was all gravy- rating- 7 vote- bio... aiyo... return the favor and vote on mine and thesun's battle... heres the link http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80333 |
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