AngellicalR v.s. Smooth JT
 

10-20 lines...
all votin rules...
no recyclin...
both drops at same time, post when can...

Unlike me your life is an ephifeny,
Be pissed at me, all you want,
Taunt you with all these temptations,
This right here is an eratic situation,
And you don't even understand this quadratic equation,
Waving as I lower your body into the grave,
Engraving a number onto ur headstone,
infinity numbers away from Bizzy Bone,
Grown enough to think you can sit on my thrown,
My past life that is now known,
Zoning on AngellicalR, next to me but yet so far,
Apart from rapping, I can blow you away,
With duel smg's I make ur life fade,
Raid your body of soul and control,
Your messing with an enemy you just don't know....

U's supposed to be smooth but u a lil rough round tha edges/
this stupid lil newb should've known wat a vet is.../
dawg ;) ...i've read ur shit, u can't allow urself a good spit/
read tha verbal script and realize ur name's not in it/
JT, J-ust T-urn back before u front tha wrong battle rap/
can u handle tha fact my rap punches more pak than ur "lyrical gat"?/
u'll get smaked around 3 times, from 2 hands, and 1 rhyme/
this guy needs to accept his defeat, and go to jail for tha crime/
of tryin to humiliate me when his jokes were pointless/
this is his first and will be his very last joint, shit/
didn't know i had to destroy weak MC's to be on top/
but if i got to, fine, give me a pellet gun, pop pop/
hit u in tha finger now u be cryin in agony/
"oh i broke a nail" and then u started naggin me/
wat r u? a transy? wit an intention to become my wife/
even if u were my psychologist, i'd kick u out my life/
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79793
only real honkies talk about cars and trucks ^^/
but my dune buggy is speakin, yellin "I DON'T GIVE NO FUCK!"/
so y don't u mess wit tha hall of tha fake playaz n hataz/
it's were u belong u know, enough, bitch, see u lata/

lmao @ angellicalR

JT- had a basic flow structure, no wordplay that
stood out, no hard punches and his vocab was kinda weak...
just keep battlin and elevatin...

Angelical- nice flow, and GREAT wordplay... had
some decent punches... overall it was a good spit and
it didnt really take much to beat JT....

vote- AngelicalR

i thought ar won this wit better punchs flow wordplay and multis good shit by both but ar came harder ok and hit this up wit an honest vote



http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79323

uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

oh and, Juicy-J, u can't even vote yet so wat tha hell r u talkin bout??? thus, for wastin a post in my battle, i will not vote...thank you!

AngellicalR v.s. Smooth JT


Smooth JT i can honestly tell your new

you needa step ya game up
improve ya punches - add some real wordplayy
just elevate !!

overall this battle wasnt worth reading !!

punches,multis,creativity, goes to AngellicalR

Gotta come straight out with dis one. Angellica come out hard. Had some impressive flow and structure. I think she took this hands down..JT was up there but i didnt feel it was hard enough no packing punches at all really...

Vote = Angel

Angellical snatched this battlejust about in every category.Smooth
needs to get better though.

Complextiy:Angellical
Vocab:Smooth
Punches:Angellical
Personals:Angellical
Multis:Niether , work on it
Structure:Angellical

Overall:Angellical

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