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Alias-C 09-17-03 03:49 PM

~Topic-less (straight spittin')~
 
Sidetracking a bit from my usual topical stuff... check it!

Hey yo, yo... real rap fanatics, gonna feel this rhyming addict, see I know my mathematics//
lyrically and literally, my art of rap is like a military infantry//
the messages I spit are like recruiters, my hostile rhymes are like sharpshooters, aiming at all intruders, while my dome is the intelligence team knowledge pursuer, with more data stored than Pentium computers//
So while your style be technologically in minimal, mine’s on Computer digital, not even Y2K could delete my Hard-drive lyrical constantly upgrading verbal visuals, don’t get it wrong the shit ain’t fictional...

I know I got y'all shivering, my math's equivalent, to 10 times what y'all delivering, I know y'all listening, and when I'm spitting in… y'all ears, it's total fear what y'all experiencing//
cause with this flow I run through foes like epidemics, have’em begging for a medic, got’em asking for prosthetics, shit’s pathetic, they don’t get it//
see the bullshit they spit is like venom, while my style is like the antidote serum, they don’t spit math using my mathematics theorems…

Yo... I'm caught with a rap flow disease that has no remedy, I'm sickening those who listen to my melody, don’t even need to speak I'll reach most just with telepathy//
I’m lyrically impulsive, my rhymes are self-conductive, always verse productive, with these lines y'all minds gon' be abducted//
but It’s been a long time since I emerged, rhyming is now a biological urge, invading minds to cause a psychological splurge//
rhyming faster than Ultra Sonic, mixing poetry and Ebonics, got y’all jumping like hydraulics, off the walls, neurotic, psychotic and all//
These verses man be terminal, I pump gray matter chemicals, like they be fucking seminal fuel, and now I see you want to duel//
with my verbal content, but shit’s too complex, take a shot you get a knot in your cerebral cortex//
yeah… even the rumors causing tumors in your brain, they say I’m humored every time I hear your name…

a bit long, yeah... but if you read all.... then thanx... let me know what ya'll think... Peace

Alias-C 09-18-03 02:49 PM

come on, I'm trying something different here... tell me something... lol....

supreme slayer 09-18-03 04:57 PM

yo this is real different to your usual stuff, but it works man tight flow, a complex one but you maintain it good and make it work man. im feelin this. yo check out for the youth please, i jus dropped it. peace.

Alias-C 09-19-03 02:18 PM

...Yo... have you read any of my other stuff? lol....
Anyways dawg, thanx for replying...

DiverseSyndicate 09-20-03 01:21 AM

this piece was ill, nice vocab, good multis, nice imagery, tight ryhme scheme, well laid out piece,keep droppin,by tha way i appreciate tha replies u hit my pieces up wit,keep it real playa.~1~

lyricalmami 09-20-03 01:24 AM

this shit is nice and you had it down paked
the shit was ill
yo check my post out its called> my life my life/jus a lil sum


hit it up aight
1

Alias-C 09-20-03 08:30 PM

yo no doubt Diverse...
^sure I'll take a look at yours.... thanx

Gene Pool 09-20-03 08:56 PM

yo man that shit was tight, lotsa complexity, and real tight wordplay and structure. was feelin it the whole way through nice piece man.

Alias-C 09-21-03 09:28 PM

cool, thanx... like I said, I'm in to topicals, but every now and then I like to drop some straight spittin' senseless shit... lol... hahaha
I'm glad y'all is feeling it...

Alias-C 09-22-03 05:29 PM

uppin'... some more feedback you be cool... lol...

Alias-C 09-23-03 03:02 PM

uppin' this... one last time... come on....


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