Funda-mentalz vs saracen
 

6 lines due 10 mins after both of us check in

same rules


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gud luck

Dont be fooled by his battle record or vocab, read the verses before votin
Aiyo, why the fuck am I BATTLIN this HERB-AGAIN?? Whats your NAME-AGAIN?
SARACEN? I'll have you LOOKIN like Nancy CARRIGAN
DIABETIC? Then I'll have ya OVERLOADED with PENOCILAN-from my 'sugar' sweet 'punches
Shit kid, I'll have you served like poor kids without lunches
"Vegetarian?"-No? Then why the fuck are you battlin 'herbs' I eat meat and soak your blood-up with sponges!(look at the herbs he beat in his sig)
Aiyo, so next time you battle me, just remember the plague is contagious
And by battlin me you just caught your first effect of braveness...(I rep lyrical plague)

spit...

your not a vet,just a herb that posts a lot**,
your wins are against newbies,more often than not,
call that a diss,weak random punches are to vague,
to hit hard,you cudnt be ill if you caught the plague*,
dick riding is Fundamental to u gettin votes,
its not incidental,because theyre all quotes,

* his crew
** bin here a month and got 500 posts

you had more than six lines............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................

500 posts cuz i was co leader of lyrical terrorist union and was helpin out yak pak...uppin for votes

ok i will break this down
Funda-
Aiyo, why the fuck am I BATTLIN this HERB-AGAIN?? Whats your NAME-AGAIN?
SARACEN? I'll have you LOOKIN like Nancy CARRIGAN

^^a weak attempt at multi's, seemed too forced, punch was ok, i guess, not too good, blah.

DIABETIC? Then I'll have ya OVERLOADED with PENOCILAN-from my 'sugar' sweet 'punches
Shit kid, I'll have you served like poor kids without lunches
"Vegetarian?"-No? Then why the fuck are you battlin 'herbs' I eat meat and soak your blood-up with sponges!

^^didn't like any of those except the last line, pretty nice punch there, good flow.

Aiyo, so next time you battle me, just remember the plague is contagious
And by battlin me you just caught your first effect of braveness

^^kinda weak finisher, ok.

Overall-weak verse. Didn't see anything impressive. Can't be called "wack" but not good, a few ok punches. 5/10

saracen-
your not a vet,just a herb that posts a lot**,
your wins are against newbies,more often than not,

^^um...ok flow...but....where's the punch?

call that a diss,weak random punches are to vague,
to hit hard,you cudnt be ill if you caught the plague

^^ok personal, didn't hit too hard.

dick riding is Fundamental to u gettin votes,
its not incidental,because theyre all quotes,

^I dunno. I liked this finisher a lot even though it seems basic at first. After you reread it, it becomes more clear. Very nice flow/personal.

Overall-nothing too hard hitting, not too many multi's, but more personals, pretty good verse. You were weak in the opener but then got better. 6.5/10

Punches-fund, just by a hair.
Flow-saracen
wordplay-tie
multi's-fund
personals-sara
metas-tie
vocab-tie
creativity-tie
opener-tie(didnt like either one too much.)
finisher-saracen
favorite line-saracen
dick riding is Fundamental to u gettin votes,
its not incidental,because theyre all quotes,

Vote=saracen

ppl are gonna disagree with me, but i dunno, i was just feeling saracen more.

*used to rep lyrical plague left cuz noone was doing shit*
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hmm....this was a iight battle...funda to me started out nice with a good diss...I think he coulda end his fourth line with abetta Punch..he edge by comin a lil harder...his vegetarian line hit nice

saracen did'nt hit as hard and his fourth line was his best but it's hella played.....even tho it was a short battle saracen did'nt show enuff skills to me..in short battles you gotta start Fie! and end Blazin.......

vote Funda

3rd uppin dont sleep............................................. .........................................

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last uppin??? FUCKIN VOTE!!!.................................................. .................

EVEN THOUGH I DONT REALLY LIKE THIS FUNDAMENTAL BITCH.. IM A HAVE TO GIVE HIM THE VOTE.. SARACENS VERSE WAS TOO SHORT AND IT LACKED PUNCHLINES

weak from both but fundamentalz still won in every area, flow wordplay punches and structure... i seen better from fundamentalz though....
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saracen needs to add some multies and better punches to his game

VOTE FUNDAMENTALZ

funda, work on your flow and some of your punchlines. ur flow was off alot. saracen it took me 5 seconds to finish reading your verse, it was weak, no punches, weak personals, good flow, but overall very weak for such a short battle.

vote- FUNDA

he just came better.. PERIOD.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...3171#post783171

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79906

vote honestly, break down my battle wit street a little bit, and dont just vote for him cuz some other ppl did..
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