Hate Me Now
 

Hate me now, with America's army you couldn't, take me out
you're very frowned, that you aren't me, sit back down
you won't harm me, with envious looks, i wrote the book
like five i'm alarming leavin ya'll shook i'm like a crook
fuck what you're experience in this game is to me
you'll seem like a rook/
in comparison i got you hooked to my reel and i'm reelin in
you're now hooked to the feeling of me bashing ya face in
cus lyrically i'm fuckin amazin in these flows demonstratin
of what i know i'm so cold if you flicked my face it'd crash in
long i wouldn't have lasted cus in this state i put you on smash
kid to me you wished you skilled mc's in talkin constant trash
i got the will to be a great mc i'll embarrass you like a surface rash
you're purse i'll snatch and give it to ya boyfriend
you're worse fall back and live to tell stories again//

wots da message here, some ov ya shit flows aight, but i would try and make it clearer, aint ya finishin it

we out dawg..................................

write anova couple of verses an i check it out again. peace

just a straight up spit here keystyle typa shit, just talkin shit, that's the message, fuck with me and get fucked up. Usually when i just drop a verse with nothin really in mind shit talkin comes out, and that's basically what this is.

yo i thought it was hella good. i saw the message, but anyway the vocab was ok, the wordplay was good, and the content was nice. keep postin and elevatin dude i was feelin that.

yo please return the favor check out my post, its called "changes"

^^thanx, checked it, uppin..

nice drop, it was pretty tight, alright wordplay,average vocab,nice structure, over all not bad spit.keep droppin.~1~