off the top of my head..
 

Love is one of the most powerful things in the world. True love is the greatest of all. Through everything that happens, or goes wrong, that love is always there. It may drift away, then without even expecting it, it burns back and bright. After all is done, and everything calms down, you sit and think about what you miss and your heart feels like it sunk into you stomach,.... you see it. You miss being loved for you and nothing else. You miss being held by the one you love. You think about them all the time and after it all you relize your in true love.......... No one could ever replace that spot in your heart. You just sit wounder and think. Is this all real and true??.............It is and you are in true love.......

Dopeness.
Great spoken word piece, the topic of 'love' has been done many a time, but this was heart felt and that shone through in this piece, i felt.
i didnt really like your paragraphed struycture to it, but the content was top dollar.

props my man.

You spoke true. From within. Not adhering to any structure or anything. Just writing. And i appreciate that. That, and what you actually said. The simple meaning behind it. Which so many make (or it just becomes) so complex..

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