Fatal D vs Match you (shud be gud newbie shit)
 

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10 lines max
10 mins to spit

im here lets get this shit blasted....roll calls over dog............................................... ..............................

Fatal Checking in
yo ima spit now cus im short for time...

Yo "match you" you cant even match me/
im a leave ya half standin when i shoot ya in ya knee/
Yo you worse off than jimmy , with a garbage bag full of clothes/
You a pussy with yeast infection, a pimp without the hoes/
Ya nuthin but another fool to me, ill leave you lying in the gutter/
now give me you verse dont be scared so dont stutter/

yo mams a ho and she aint very good/
and you aint nuthin but a pussy thats why you left the hood/

......D

a light battle and i was called upon//
ill make this kids name an oxymoron.....ur MORE ON(80posts, im the newby)//
its sad to see....the canable in me....is gonna make F8lDz//
ass deceased...tragically.....a FATALITY//
im way to smart with the flow...your dark with the flow//
i keeps it hip hop wallace in my blood retro(biggy ref)//
this guys only gonna suffer one loss somethin to live for//
all thow i seved him up a granite headboard(grave)//
**lyrical Killer**
if you was dyin no one would save ya//
i zip up my pants now you can savor my flava//

we newb guys im just askin for all who vote or view let us know ur opinions and what we can work on im out ONE

Both need elevation, .........used some damn played lines,.....came out little wack,...use more complexity in ur verse,......i cant vote, in my eyes a tie ^^.......didnt like one verse better than the other so^^..................
...........................keep elevatin^^

both need to up ya skills a lil...Match needs betta structure with ya flow...some of ya shit was'nt makin since..be more creative...use betta punches...work on ya disses....

Fatal D was'nt that good either but he flowed iight...other than that nothin stood out......

vote fatal d

I think tonya is about right cause, match you need to elevate on ya flow and use better punchlines, the ones u had werent very catchy n didnt make me laugh as much as fatals did so thaz why im votin fo him......

yo mods ive been waitin for this shit to go on my recordz for weeks hurry the fuck up plz
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Shut Up Dumb Newbie... If You Hadn't Set The Polls To Close After One Day... You Wouldn't Have To Wait... Polls Reopened At 2-0.
-Axe

UPPED Cuz I Had To Fix This Kid's Mistake.
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it wasnt a tie to me both were wack
not good at all
but atleast fatal got some punches in there
vote=fatal

wack battle.....fatal got this with that shoot u in the knees jumpoff.....further explanation not needed cuz both verses were done sloppily..
vote-fatalD

^^^werd, it was pretty wack, but fatal had better flow and the knees line won it for him, both of u need to elevate drastically though.

peace......