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tsheff112 09-18-03 11:19 AM

.....Ever been so mad?
 
The rain falls harder now, comin down in buckets,
I suit up, all blacked out, grab my supplies like fuck it//
I hope you had a good time with my girl tonight,
And I'll try to keep the noise to a minimum so you can sleep tight//
Under your truck now, I grab some fuckin wires and pull
I disarm your car alarm like unpluggin a power tool//
But don't worry, I'll replace the alarm with some bomb shit alrite,
Wire it up in to place, and leave it just out of sight//
Now that the job's done, I cover my tracks and hideaway,
But I'm still where I can see how you react the next day//
I hear your door shut, it's time to take my girl to her place,
You two look good together, can't wait till I see death in your face//
You get into the truck, click your seatbelt and stick the key in,
Then you lean over and kiss my girl, her fuckin eyes are gleamin//
I brace myself for the blast, and my heart starts to pound,
You turn the key at last, and it sends shockwaves through the ground//
Car bomb bitch, now both of my problems are gone,
And all I see is burning metal and random scraps on the ground//
I walk over to the mess, I see the end of what you had,
I can't believe I pulled this shit, but I've never been so mad...
I rummage through the scraps, find what I want and then jet,
Look up at me from hell bith, and see your hood ornament around my neck.

Provoked Images 09-18-03 11:44 AM

sort of like Em's 97 Bonnie and Clyde except urs is happenin before hand, but wit that feelin it sorta made tha wordplay and wat not seem basic, if it wasn't feelin like an Em flow, it would've been aight, elevate and do it some more and then continue to do it...

tsheff112 09-18-03 11:55 AM

Yeah, I didn't mean to make this shit sound like an EM flow at all, I don't even like him that much. I can see what you mean, though, but that's not what I was shooting for. Good shot anyway...

supreme slayer 09-18-03 05:15 PM

yo good story man i like this verse, i didnt notice the EM thing until i saw that post so dont worry bout that man its all good. check out my rhyme "for the youth" please i jus dropped it. Peace

Genesis_two 09-18-03 05:19 PM

that was a good drop better story tellin then lyrics but if you elevate your lyrics a little your going to be sick keep droppin good shit


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