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judgement of a high man...(think about it)
a freefall to hit tha ground wit no sound/
look around and found/ u'll thinkin u could/ beat me in my hood/ but u can't even if i was gagged n bound/ wat's wrong? u finally realized this/ a split headache from my gun, than made ur eyes split/ now u seein double vision? and u want to be forginnin?/ fuck that, I have chosen that u should not be livein/ tha judges won't budge/ pass judgement on a cuz/ fuck tha love of tha mortals, i'll kill doves/ white morphed to red/ but black instead/ is tha inside of ur head/ enough said.../ tha judgement has come by verbalness arranged in guns/ ur finished, done...no more fun/ act hardcore, face meet hard floor/ such a disgrace to call urself part of tha hard four/ (four horsemen) verse 2 will be a curse too/ since birth u/ thought no-raps was thirst through/ a dry desert, desert ur mind/ one time, more than once wit one rhyme/ not a crime simply tha law undefined/ undid tha judgement? no not this time/ ur in hell, where u'll dwell, cause u fell/ through tha CPU screen of a cheap and weak DELL/ killed and had gotten billed in tha aftalife/ for ur body chilled even afta u melt/ nuclear strike.../ simpathy is no existance/ persistant enough to exist wit/ tha bitch clips out of a hitless/ bitch this is tha shit BITCH/ u have been judged, as a stupid bitch/ so go to ur grave and behave in that ditch/ tha judgement has come by verbalness arranged in guns/ ur finished, done...no more fun/ act hardcore, face meet hard floor/ such a disgrace to call urself part of tha hard four/ (four horsemen) judgement day will come when u r in tha bathroom takin a shit, and u will die nameless, numberless, thoughtless, mindless, as well as hairless...so graph ur soul and prepare to go...it is finally here... |
hello????
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nice shit
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this was good, your flow was easy to catch cos of ya short lines and you had decent wordplay happenin. If anything your verses were a little short, i would suggest adding more lines to each verse.
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uppin...
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Yeah dog, nice shit on tha real.
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can i please get some real feedback???
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you had a nice flow but wouldnt hurt to work on yer vocab a bit more
neways, it was a coo' drop dunny |
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