check out my 1st audio's
 

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/liltrivmusic.htm
go there and think me wot u think of my 1st audio's

too many ripped beats, use original beats, flow is off most of time, lryics aint bad, keep elavatin

im going to move this for you being that you cant read...

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wow....this is really really bad dog.......your way off flow....the quality sucks...and again..the flow is really really bad....

the lyrics are real bad too

elevate

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Yea dawg i wasnt feelin this but its ur first audio so u can only get better stay up b