a split personallity, GOOD VS. BAD as NUETRAL watches....and chooses one...
 

i look left...

right...

forward...

and backward...

up...

down...

all around...

where am i?...

a see...

no, hear...

no, smell...

no, taste...

no, feel...

no.......i sense...

another being near...

yet so far...

where is the space...

that contains me?...

i have not found my escape...

my release...

where is it?...

so i can find that other person?...

inside myself?...

its different. a spacial poem. I can understand it, but i dont really feel it. it probably was written to be simple but yet deep. I dont really feel the substance of the poem.

I didn't understand it. The title threw me off cause when I was reading it I didn't notice the different personalities and I didn't notice where neutral was watching and choosing. Though it seemed to be the wrong info, I got more out of the title than the writing itself. Didn't like this one too much but oh well, you can't keep everyone happy. Keep posting.

are you talking about your concience or are you a schizo?.....lol....i got your point the struggle to be yourself or something like that.....i like this it had a simple yet deep meaning forces the reader to look beneath the words....great drop i like your style..