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WORD~PERFECT 09-19-03 02:33 AM

THE LAST OMEN(you cant stop me)
 
My monoxide- mix to remix with a fix- of dithyamide-
Verbaler homicide...... making lyrical murder.
So basically, You want as much beaf as soy burgers.
There’s 2 kinds of led to fear if i blast-cause I draw fast-
weather the mercury Dip hollow tip…. Or on a skillcraft.
Im that real! My flow down pour regardless of weather-regardless what ever-
Im the hardest and clever-and if I aint your equal…. I can only be better.
Ripen every m.c. in ALPHABETICAL ORDER,per ALPHA LETTER-
So if you ever want a sample…...................... F.U.!!!!
you get beat on beat each punchline hits per sample cue-of 2.
So if it’s a 2 beat count you’ll loose twice-
loose 2 life’s.
Yeah you underground crew types, roll deep-but that’s a metaphor bitch they only R.I.P togeather burried 6 feet.
You all some TRANSIES talken you put work.
maybe on the DALANCIE CORNER CROSS DRESSING kid I flip SKIRTS-and BURRY anyone of you fakes who claim you do DIRT.
It’s NON CENTZ the OMEN with a legion-of cockriders’ that pledge allegiance-To my secretions-of flames that can leave you lames with 3rd degree burn lesions.
Im hot and could hearted…so once the lessons started- you’ll learn I equate to everything from the equator to the polar regions-so fear me.
or Be left departed-like the pangian theory.
i crucify those blasphormer’s for not believen.
If you take my name in veign, you will be left bleeden.
Cause I hustle words… with muscle verbs… you couldnt find in track meeting.
Your styles receading-with skills sponsored by rogaine.
You’re an f-18 im an f-14... kid im another PLAIN.
Another level, you cant see from your 180 degree hemisphere-I rule the earth’s 360 sphere by atmosphere.
fuck being transparent my actions make everything clear.
I don’t like ¾’s of all of you.
That means to me 3 out of every four is whore’s.
Who think fucken with me is your only chance to go HARD~KORE(xxx).
So for you cats that don’t think im twisted with the slur-
Im in the mix and once I stir-
id say fuck you.....
fuck your mom......
and the guy that fucked her.
So forget dropping a cd.. you aint got one-and if you did I wouldnt cop it if it came with a refund.


HOOK:
*scratches* the omens,,,,
this is verbal retaliation-murder kill and assasination.
A MILLION WAYS TO DIE YOU DO THE CALCULATIONS-
strangle a choke artist ,cut his blood sirculation-
then kill the dj for given him rotation.x2

___________________beat change_______________________

You nigguz think you sound cute-but got it confused like obtuse infused with angles measured acute.
i spit the facts thats a fact kid its true-
Your skills harder to understand than latins in domestic diputes.
While my talent translates to a win regardless of subtitles-
So rivals- battle the god qouting exorcist passages from bibles.
Who are you to me? Nothing more than an easy victory!
An out dated rapper trying to get hit by a punch(line) to collect dissability.
These kids is jokes-acten thug but carry no slugz and would’nt be STRAPPED FOR CASH unless they were broke
.Oh that’s your illest joint? Watch it get smoked.
As you get yoked-for being whack…..
I’ll kill you in a song and leave you dead in your tracks.
I un balance peoples' heart rate on ballads.
if I was you and not me then I’d be a waiste of talent.
the kid who secreamed godamnit-that CENTZ showed the whole planet you exposed spitten ASS like you tossed salads.
My extrateresstrial intellectual perception-could alienate regardless of M.I.B protection.
The exsemtion of perfection-
the sybolism of true lyricism.
while your video displays girls shaken they assess for fan hypnotism-you claim realism.
Its just embarrassing you all are a mess- killen rap so basically you assisted in PAC’S DEATH.
HEAVEN BLESS those pioneers- who are not here-until im laid to rest-i'll make thes fakes take they last breaths-just out of respect.
If I don’t succeed my last will and testaments-will distill through my fans inheritence-carry me last rights on sabordinents-and drop bombs on each of these m.c.’s coredinents.
It gets twice that intence-in an instance- while im living cause I can fire bulls~eye regardless of distance.
You subject lacks matter…so it doesn’t matter- ill shit on you like a squeezed colon or blatter.
come back and splatter you flat then do it again and beat you flatter.
shatter-your every appendage and scatter them…like they did OSIRUS plus since- your addicted to persistance-I’ll show you the tight shit with a mic shoved in your anal entrance.
take an x~ray and cram it in till it resembles your large intestines.
This aint a battle verse or threat disbursed-this a curse- for those in my path who wish to get murked my sub verse will submerse-and shock you at a thousand megahertz.
Im better than you better then him better then them.im xx surrounded by mating xy meaning One masculine trapped by some feminem-lesbians.


HOOK:
*scratches* the omens,,,,
this is verbal retaliation-murder kill and assasination.
A MILLION WAYS TO DIE YOU DO THE CALCULATIONS-
strangle a choke artist ,cut his blood sirculation-
then kill the dj for given him rotation.x2

Mr.Christensen 09-19-03 02:41 AM

WOW that was like a 5 minute read...

1st verse - fire... i love the number use.. espically that bar with 2... multies kinda lacking but wordplay, vocab and flow more than made up for it
Hook - i felt it could have been better i couldnt find the flow or the rhymes
2nd verse - not as good as the 1st to me... once again the multies lacked, and it seemed you were running out of steam cause a few lines seemed forced

You subject lacks matter…so it doesn’t matter- ill shit on you like a squeezed colon or blatter-and splatter you flat then do it again and beat you flatter.

good internal rhymes but it seemed forced to me

over all great drop kid...
p.s. dont i see you on like every open mic i respond on...

If you would be so kind *not a battle*
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80529
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80134

WORD~PERFECT 09-19-03 02:49 AM

i will peep it out twin and thanks for honest feed back

WORD~PERFECT 09-19-03 02:59 AM

yo your attachment threads dont show pop oh and so you know the sencond verse is a beat change where the style flips also i edited the hook to format batter now.

Mr.Christensen 09-19-03 03:03 AM

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80529
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80134

Mr.Christensen 09-19-03 03:11 AM

p.s. i liked the old hook more :(
u got a PM
with the style switch the 2nd comes out better.. but 1st is stil my fav

WORD~PERFECT 09-19-03 03:53 AM

AIGHT

Otherwordz 09-19-03 04:00 AM

yo son...this was Fire...keep reppin' them Boricua mutt Brooklynite Omenz (only me and you lol)...

WORD~PERFECT 09-19-03 04:08 AM

34 TH SARATOAG TWIN BORICUA ANTES EL FIN MY BROTHER I EDITED SOME OF IT IF YOU SEE ANYTHING YOU DODNT LIKE TELL ME

Otherwordz 09-19-03 04:14 AM

Utica Av. papichulo...right here...I'd maybe add a coupla more multi'z but other than that...it's all good...

WORD~PERFECT 09-19-03 04:32 AM

YO WHERE IS OUR COLLAB I SEN CLEAR YOUR PM BOX

Otherwordz 09-19-03 04:42 AM

aiiight...cleared...

~ProPaiN~ 09-19-03 05:47 AM

YO hot Shit No Doubt

Am feeelin it reppin it to the fullest


Contact me fo Collabo word

and yea i send u PM

WORD~PERFECT 09-19-03 09:07 AM

no doubt

WORD~PERFECT 09-20-03 02:14 AM

UPPIN


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