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DiverseSyndicate 09-19-03 06:39 AM

Short key style
 
Dont keep frontin, i give you somethin// to smoke while your bumpin//
my lyrics are all i need// to cause grieve and leave u stressin//
concieved as a blessin, percieved as tha best-one//
wanna know my secret well peep-it// never come weak and stay away from tha cheap shit//
constructin a deep-spit,while puffin some sweet-shit//
wish i could takeaway homelessness and give some one a home//
take away tha crack dealers and cap peelers and take away tha chromes//
that way u wouldnt need-one-to-survive//
and we-could-get-high,but strictly-off-the-thai//
smoke 'till i float while takin blunts to tha throat//
choke from my dope, and cope wit reality of challeng-ing coke//
rehab wasnt effective, confessions from my essence//
my presence is gone in just seconds//
taught lessons to peasants on how to be legends.

Edicius 09-19-03 06:42 AM

Has some nice rhymes,in it ...^^

u had sum ok vocab,...and some nice flow, ...good drop , keep em comin,


hit up change, ft Bash thnx man

DiverseSyndicate 09-19-03 07:30 AM

thanks for tha replies,uppin

DiverseSyndicate 09-19-03 02:56 PM

uppin for more replies.

DiverseSyndicate 09-20-03 01:15 AM

uppin for replies

lyricalmami 09-20-03 01:22 AM

yo was you high??
just asking. but all in all ya shit was good and it had aight vocab

yo hit up my post its called> my life my lief/jus a lil sum

aight
holla

DiverseSyndicate 09-20-03 01:25 AM

yea i was kinda blazed, still uppin^^

Maven 09-20-03 02:17 AM

don't up so much.
one piece per day.
read the rules, kiddo.
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