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Blah.... KEYSTYLE - 5 bars I think -CHECK IT
As ovation starts... brain'll leave population halved
LFMAO @ these illiterates with quotation marks! Yeah I spit fairly sick... these bitches lack pedigree If you took martial arts, couldn't grasp tenth degree We rape bitches... call it foreplay... black out and stop games Half the foolz in frontlines lackin' multi's and wordplay My fever's medical... knock you cross-eyed when personal B could use funk to strike with an "ass-sonal" of impersonals! I speak-spewing-hot, facing b, i leave-foolz-distrought The fact's there's too many wankstas and they need to be shot! |
upping..... FEED ME.....
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pretty good keystyle. alotta emotion and its was good. the first 2 lines weren't that great, coulda been better. overall good!
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a decent peace i would of asked for more but this wasnt bad and makes me want to read more of your work
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good keystyle liked most of it sick drop
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nice piece,it was a little choppy at times but other than that it was ill.keep spittin.~1~
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^ Stop upping this, if you do it again i'll close it. .
This wasnt bad for a keystyle, a little too short to really get into, i didnt feel the opning bar but your flows pretty nice, internals were basic and it lacked multi's but i realise it was a key, so im not judging you. Write something to a set topic, Keystyles dont show real skill. Eace-Pay! |
just wondering... so what does... i had a topic in mind... stuff i consider pet peeves... like quotations mark when there's no wordplay and othershit...
lack multi's As ovation-starts... brain'll leave population-halved LFMAO @ these illiterates with quotation-marks! I speak-spewing-hot, facing b, i leave-foolz-distrought The fact's there's too many wankstas and they need-to-be-shot! lacked multi's... ROFFLMMFAO x 10000 |
upping
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