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brainsurgeon 09-19-03 07:50 AM

Blah.... KEYSTYLE - 5 bars I think -CHECK IT
 
As ovation starts... brain'll leave population halved
LFMAO @ these illiterates with quotation marks!
Yeah I spit fairly sick... these bitches lack pedigree
If you took martial arts, couldn't grasp tenth degree
We rape bitches... call it foreplay... black out and stop games
Half the foolz in frontlines lackin' multi's and wordplay
My fever's medical... knock you cross-eyed when personal
B could use funk to strike with an "ass-sonal" of impersonals!
I speak-spewing-hot, facing b, i leave-foolz-distrought
The fact's there's too many wankstas and they need to be shot!

brainsurgeon 09-19-03 03:28 PM

upping..... FEED ME.....

brainsurgeon 09-20-03 02:11 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by brainsurgeon
upping..... FEED ME.....

Orpheus Rex 09-20-03 04:27 AM

pretty good keystyle. alotta emotion and its was good. the first 2 lines weren't that great, coulda been better. overall good!

WORD~PERFECT 09-20-03 04:30 AM

a decent peace i would of asked for more but this wasnt bad and makes me want to read more of your work

Genesis_two 09-20-03 11:25 AM

good keystyle liked most of it sick drop

brainsurgeon 09-20-03 11:35 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by brainsurgeon
upping..... FEED ME.....

DiverseSyndicate 09-21-03 12:19 AM

nice piece,it was a little choppy at times but other than that it was ill.keep spittin.~1~

brainsurgeon 09-22-03 01:45 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by brainsurgeon
upping..... FEED ME.....

Baron Mynd 09-22-03 01:55 PM

^ Stop upping this, if you do it again i'll close it. .

This wasnt bad for a keystyle, a little too short to really get into, i didnt feel the opning bar but your flows pretty nice, internals were basic and it lacked multi's but i realise it was a key, so im not judging you.

Write something to a set topic, Keystyles dont show real skill.

Eace-Pay!

brainsurgeon 09-22-03 02:11 PM

just wondering... so what does... i had a topic in mind... stuff i consider pet peeves... like quotations mark when there's no wordplay and othershit...

lack multi's

As ovation-starts... brain'll leave population-halved
LFMAO @ these illiterates with quotation-marks!
I speak-spewing-hot, facing b, i leave-foolz-distrought
The fact's there's too many wankstas and they need-to-be-shot!

lacked multi's... ROFFLMMFAO x 10000

brainsurgeon 09-23-03 11:23 AM

upping


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