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Born To Kill 09-19-03 12:12 PM

Hopefully ya'll find this ill...and insightful...
 
Some say I spit slick and sick...
Others say I can't spit for dick.
I guess there's 2 sides and 1 is tight...
Spittin meaningful and deep, shinin bright.
Leavin egos wrecked despite the polls...
Eatin beef like it's served with dinner rolls.
Teachin lessons in life like I'm a teacher...
Preachin Open Mic gospel like I'm a preacher.
But the other side must be a world class herb...
Losin battles ta kids and repeatedly gettin served.
Caring bout reps and wantin ta be known as a vet...
Votin for the same cat twice and for that losin respect.
Must be a dick ridin faggit, at least that's what's said...
Someone even wants me banned and most likely dead.
So here's what I've decided, here's what's going down...
I'm a stay exactly as I am, part grown killer, part child clown.
Cuz we all have our faults, tryin ta be perfect ain't human...
It's like tellin a rose ta not thorn, and ta forget about bloomin.
So I hope after readin you'll know one more thing about me...
I might act a fool, but I'm always real and true, so I'm sorry if ya disagree.

-ElocuShun- 09-19-03 12:15 PM

nice..................i've read quite a bit of your stuff and you can either be ill as hell or jus sleep.............but this time ya everything was there.........good work

Edicius 09-19-03 12:17 PM

Nice , was real personal feld that....a little basic, ....but u brought the message clearly...nice drop :)


Can u hit up,....Change my new open mic :)

Mr.Christensen 09-19-03 12:19 PM

hmm where to start

the flow was nice, it was an easy read... the vocab was so so... sometimes good sometimes not.... the consitentcy of this made it shine... good drop

if you would be so kind
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80529

12 09-19-03 12:49 PM

This was nice, i sense anomosity about forum politics...


Does anyone know how to change the glow of your name?

C_Drama 09-19-03 07:44 PM

i like dis shit

nice drop dunny

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