subtractions
 

there are some subtractions that people need and dont have/
it happens no matter what time you gotta stay on your rhyme/
you gotta be focused add to what has been subtracted so you can make it better/
with subtractions you wont understand what where you were and what happened when that thing occured/
subtractions are things in your life that have been gone or what you have lost or what has happened/
your feelings have to blend and use your brain to spend on what is gonna start to send/
it will send the future and the structure of what your success will be built/
sometimes it will tilt and be lopside/
you may even feel suicide and thats what happens when subtraction collides/
with the past and has crashed and has blast into pieces fallin to the core of the ground/
all around pound for pound droppin and pieces that are found/
all over the place is just showin a little taste of what the subtractions have made and knocked out the satisfaction of a being and creating what they seeing is filling with shit that is subtracting more and more/
droppin to the floor fast and heavy/
startin to be steady but you aint ready and you gotta because you dont know what comes next/
you could add to what you say in text/

critique this please

you have no respect after that sexist ass post you did son
but all in all it wuz coo, waite no let me change that> this shit is deep cuzz it seems like you got alot sturing in ya mind right now . but let me ask you this why do you say things that you dont mean(pertaing to the "Female emcees suck" post)?
well get back at me kidd aight 1

Holla

for that whole "sexist" post i apologize because i then realized i slept on some female emcees that i forgot. i am sorry if i hurt anyone or made anyone mad. this was a mistake because i respect females like lauryn hill, mc lyte, foxxy brown, khia, and im sorry. now can we all end this and get on with our lives, and im still uppin for critiquing.

trust we can end it but you know something like that is hard to end. but as far as me i'll end it aight

oh and go check out my post aight itz like two post under yours

when i read this i brought back some real bad memories
i dont know how but it was a certain line
i dont feel like lookin over it but i'll holla later aight
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