Pounding da Streets ..... ( original , need some insights ... good or bad )
 

I brandish weapons stashed in pockets
Cash my tickets like shooting Rockets
Nervous on da trigger?,Pickup da gun-N-cock it
I aint fucking Aroun', See dese Tats on ma Brown
I get Around , Get up , fuck u Up , Cause Im Down

"Slaying" in da Streets , everyNigga I meet
Complete wid ma crew , Pack Heat Too
Say "Fuck U" out Loud to my Enemies
Celebrate Downing Fools , drinking Hennessy
Money I earn is Spent, Quick and Unwisely

Pounding da Streets , Like Im Banging on JailBars
Never been Discreet , Used to ryding in CopCars
I stop Hard , Shoot to Kill , Break Yu down cus I Ill
I do Time if Necessary , Shit I pull is Hairy , Its Scary
Top 10 most Wanted , I can claim in any Countrary

Pounding da Streets , everyday is like a snaredrum
I hit shit hard , hard as any Nigga , Shit , as Any-One
Im Followed , usually Doubled Teamed , FBI,DEA, its da same thing
Dey want the same of me , Take me Off da streets
Cause Im Trouble to Most of Da Niggas I meet

Im Pounding da Streets , my Identity is my Crysis
Sometimes I feel like Im living Different lif-ses
I got ma Kids close to me , but my Homies want da most of me
Dey Use me , Convince me , Its a Cinch G to say Fuckit anyway
N- Follow into situations dat I dont know what-dey-gonna-be

I Needs to retire , let em find another nigga for Hire
I want out , but I dont know How ... to whisper , all I know is Loud
I need peace , peace in ma inner mind ,to Unwind
All ma G's wants to do , is watch pornos and hit Rewind
I cant be Kind no More ,To set em' straight , I kickedem out da door...........

Now Dey Pounding da Streets , and Me , I gots peace .......

CrazyE

Peace

Im just getting into this open Mic thing , but Imma start critiquing everyone like how it said in da rules and all .......... Coo ...PeaceOUt

yo that shit is ill cuzz keep it up cause you gotz the flow ya herd
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