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Bionicle VS ~Young~
yea... ok... were doin
8-10 usual vote rules he spit first 45 min time limit afta check in |
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intricate with infinite shit, it's ridiculous tryin to burn me |
distinguished with linguists, kids're callin me Oxytrol the way i serve P(ee) | observe me beat this pervert geek, u stay losin n battlin beginners, u aint takin this vet | i'll stab a stake in ur chest..u a fraud convincin u ill, u got a better chance fakin ur death | ur shits cheap, hit me n u won't answer when tomorrow calls | any bitch freak cud swallow u cause u spit weak when u've got hollow balls | u're a child..please! though guys thinkin ur sick cus u got offered a trial sneeze | i'm versatile with ease, u ruff ride is the reason no one feels ur Styles P!! | u're the boy at the beach tryin to kill seagles, my bars always in a workout, their built diesel | now P wanna K talk, when u J walked is the only thing u did Ill-legal! | |
sorry a lil late... my compuer kept freezing... anyway, here it goes
Are you ready for MERK TIME!? ... ready... yo, yo, ayo... It's like I'm in a garden da way I pick out herbs and quickly treat dem ta wut dey deserve// Put dis niggaz face ta da curb, give em da Kensington kiss, except dis is murda wit werds// Inverted wit verbs, I recklessly kill niggaz just ta live'n da hype// Wit a verse like hypnotism, cuz I paralyze ya eyes and sodomize ya life// Dis bitch just artificial replacement of body parts so I serve him da-feet// I could smash ya face in da black top an you still wouldn’t make an impression on da street// I’m pressin da heat, he's stressin da beef, da game's just started pussy, it's all in play-boy// I implacate dis rag, ta implivate dis fag, cuz who else would name demself afta a childs play toy?// [b.:walks over to bionicle, signs the mic, and hands it to him:.[/b] aND DaTS... Da BaLLGaME... REFERENCE: 2nd line: Kensington Kiss: put his head on da curb and stomp... it kills dem instantly 5th: bionic is defined as an artificial body part... da feet/defeat... get it? 6th: make a dent in da street with ur face 7th: pussy in playboy, all in play.... get it? 8th: ya know dem bionicle jawns ya lil brother plays with... |
I'll break it down
Punches-YP Multie-YP Flow-Bionicle Persoanl-none OVERALL YP for a better overall verse |
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Punches...Biionicle "intricate with infinite shit, it's ridiculous tryin to burn me | distinguished with linguists, kids're callin me Oxytrol the way i serve P(ee)" Wordplay...Tie vocab...Tie Flow...Bionicle Multis....Young VOTE__BIONICLE |
YOUNG, YOU HADE THIS ONE GOOD PUNCH:
INVERTED WIT VERBS, I RECKLESSLY KILL NIGGAZ JUST TA LIVE'N DA HYPE// WIT A VERSE LIKE HYPNOTISM, CUZ I PARALYZE YA EYES AND SODOMIZE YA LIFE// BUT BI0 HAD A BETTER ONE: U'RE A CHILD..PLEASE! THOUGH GUYS THINKIN UR SICK CUS U GOT OFFERED A TRIAL SNEEZE | I'M VERSATILE WITH EASE, U RUFF RIDE IS THE REASON NO ONE FEELS UR STYLES P!! | SO IN MY OPINION BIONICAL JUST CAME BETTER IN EVERY ASPECT OF THE BATTLE. . .MORE CONSISTENT WITH PUNCHES. . .A FLOW. . .MULTI'S, HOT WORDPLAY & SLICK PERSONALS. . .YOU WAS GOOD YOUNG BUT DA FEET LINES ARE PLAYED, BESIDES THAT YOU DID HAVE A COUPLE OF NICE LINES LIKE: I’M PRESSIN DA HEAT, HE'S STRESSIN DA BEEF, DA GAME'S JUST STARTED PUSSY, IT'S ALL IN PLAY-BOY// BUT ONCE I READ THIS I THOUGHT BI0 DEFINATELY HAD IT: DISTINGUISHED WITH LINGUISTS, KIDS'RE CALLIN ME OXYTROL THE WAY I SERVE P(EE) | . . .SO MY VOTE=BI0 |
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Close Battle, Fire From Both...Lets Break This Down...
.:BREAKDOWN:. FLOW=Young P PUNCHES=Tie WORDPLAY=Bionicle METAS=Young P OVERALL=Young P VOTE=~YOUNG P~ |
If I had one-hundread post I would vote for P. Both of yous had some nice shit, equally good punches and i lovd the rhymes... but the thing in bionicles sig was gay... whenever i put the curser ova it a error box poped up... thats some gay shit. But it dont matta i dont have 100 post yet... well this is my first one.
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from now on none of dese herbs votin... less den 250 posts no votin...
fuckin wack ass bitches... uppin... no d/r it says bionicle.. folow da rules... |
Punches-Young P
Flo-Bionicle Wordplay-Young P Vocab-Young P Overall-Young P iight ima give this one to young p cuz his verse was the overall best in this battle |
how come all da vets voted for me (except brooklyn) and da newbs are votin for bionicle?? hmm... idk ... anyone have a guess?
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this was actually pretty close, young p had a few of direct punch lines but i didnt really see much creativity in them like that da feet line is played as fuck, i used it a while ago, bionicle you almost lost this shit, i thought u did at the beginning but the creativity in your verse got you this win
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this battle wqasnt explained well,...im deletin alll the non explained votes from both sides. then seein how many are left.@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@
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